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  Bedtime Fling (1/1)  

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Author: MyMateSaidSo  Published: 1/6/2010  story views: 3127
 


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This is my first try at erotic writing.

We are laying on my bed watching TV. You are laying in front of me and I have my arms around you in a close embrace. Slowly I start to move my hand up your t-shirt towards your bra. At first you're shocked and gasp as my cold hand slides up your soft supple skin. Then as my hand reaches your bra and dives inside you get a rush of erotic pleasure. After a minute of slowly caressing your boobs and gently kissing your neck you start to move your hand down the front of my trousers and into my boxers. With this a shiver is sent down my spine and my cock starts to stiffen. You delve deeper and start running your hand along my now very hard shaft. A sudden shot of ecstasy shoots through my body and with it an urge to strip you. As I start you simply allow me to, and start stripping me down as well. When we are both finally naked I throw you onto my rock solid cock. At first you slide down my naked body and start to lick at the tip of my cock. After several licks you slide my cock into your mouth and start sucking vigorously. As my cock hits the back of your throat pre-cum starts to drip out and into your mouth. But before I reach orgasm and come fully I stop you and lift you forward. I slowly guide my cock in between your glistening lips. You slowly move deeper and deeper onto it as you have full control. Once my cock is fully inside you, you start to bounce up and down shooting waves of pleasure through my body. All I do is lay and watch as you ride my cock, bouncing and grinding to your heart's content. As I watch you I lift my hand and caress your boobs and then pull you into a long passionate kiss while you are still on my cock. Slowly our groans increase and the riding becomes faster and deeper. Suddenly you scream you are going to come and as you scream this I feel a warm liquid surround my cock, lubricating the already amazing sex. Not long after I feel spasms of joy running through my body and I shout out that I am about to come. Soon after you feel my warm sticky juices inside you. But I keep coming and I fill you up so much our combined juices start dripping out of your lips. With this we collapse into each other’s arms on the bed and fall asleep reliving the night's events.
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Total Votes: 7
Steamy
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Hot
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Poster Thread
**teach**
Posted: 2010/1/9 9:20  Updated: 2010/1/9 9:20
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/5/19
From: In the night sky
Posts: 2010
 hmmmmmm
good first attempt.... Let the above ppl... Take your time. One paragraph made me feel i had to read it fast. Slow down... write again though.
tendertouch
Posted: 2010/1/6 20:12  Updated: 2010/1/6 20:12
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2009/9/24
From: Historical home in the middle of college row.
Posts: 391
 sparks
I agree with Luv2, but then again what do I know I haven't had anything published. Just wanted to say there are sparks, could be a fire in the future. Kudos on your first one.
erotic section
Posted: 2010/1/6 19:55  Updated: 2010/1/6 19:55
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/7/16
From:
Posts: 2439
 Ohhh...
I like the visual;-) It would have been nice to understand the relationship better, but as the reader I just assume these two are well known lovers:)
Luv2
Posted: 2010/1/6 11:27  Updated: 2010/1/6 11:27
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/4/7
From: Fading into the western sunset...
Posts: 5739
 Hard to follow??
MyMate? You had a nice story idea, But? The lack of 'spacing', made it hard to read. Take your time, give more details and 'Proof read' your next story, before you submit it! You'll do fine, just hang in there? ~~Luv2