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  A First Time to Remember (1/5)  

57 votes
Author: Skyybird  Published: 3/5/2007  story views: 15751
 


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They walked along in the midday sun, following a path across the meadow behind the main house. Lucy began to feel quite warm trying to keep up with his pace. It was a beautiful day. She heard the distant sound of water and realised it was the river. In the distance she could see a small wood and it seemed to be the direction they were headed in. They walked a little longer through the shaded woods and enjoyed the relief from the hot sun. They chatted a little but Lucy was too nervous to say anything of any great genius. The trees suddenly opened up and before them on the ground lay a blanket, a big pile of cushions and an enormous picnic basket. Even an ice bucket and two bottles of champagne.

“Here we are, I told you it would be worth it! This is why I was late. It’s further from the house than I thought. Is this ok?” Jack looked a little perplexed as he saw tears rolling down Lucy’s cheeks.

“Oh Jack, it’s more than ok. It’s just perfect.” Lucy laughed through her tears her fingers trying to rescue her mascara before it ran off down her face.

“Well I don’t know about you but I can’t stand stuck up restaurants and I kind of guessed you like to keep yourself to yourself. It’s a pretty spot alright.” He grinned at her and pulled her closer. “It’s even prettier with you here!” He spoke softly and she smiled at him.

“You say the sweetest things Jack.” She was suddenly full of joy and she kissed him on the lips, wrapping her arms around his neck.

Jack pulled a bottle of champagne from the ice bucket and popped the cork as Lucy stood with 2 glasses waiting to collect the frothing liquid. They both laughed as the cork flew off into the distance and they tried to catch every drop.

“A toast, Happy Birthday!”

“Thank you Jack. This is just lovely.”

They clinked glasses and drank.

They sat on the blanket and Lucy opened the basket excitedly investigating its contents. She recognised the fare straight away. It was all from Madame Valmont’s deli. Her eyes lit up and they both began eating enthusiastically.

As they ate they talked. An hour passed and it felt like minutes. She felt so comfortable with him. She found herself talking to him about her mother, and how her life had been before she had died. Jack was astonished to hear that she had never had a proper relationship.

They fed each other and drank champagne and laughed. It went to Lucy’s head but she didn’t care. She felt alive and it was good. Not to mention that ache she was trying to ignore in her crotch. She crossed her legs over and over. It wasn’t working though. It just made it worse. They talked for a while. Lucy told Jack about her Mum and how looking after her had become her life and stopped her from really having a life.

Jack watched her long legs as she shifted about and talked and he almost couldn’t hear her words as she spoke, he was finding it hard to keep his hands to himself.

They finished eating and lay back contentedly on the rug. Jack rolled over onto his side and rested a hand on her belly. He leaned in
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rpalazzo
Posted: 2008/3/24 2:38  Updated: 2008/3/24 2:38
Virgin
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 wow
must say its an awesome read. Kept me wet and going for longer then ever. What an orgasm :)
ladydeeds
Posted: 2008/3/1 0:31  Updated: 2008/3/1 0:31
Virgin
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 Well Done
I really enjoyed your story, very realistic
Layla
Posted: 2007/11/9 11:16  Updated: 2007/11/9 11:16
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/7/15
From: State of Disillusion
Posts: 654
 delicate
Beautiful and delicate, a wonderful story of first love.
cabinboy
Posted: 2007/9/23 3:25  Updated: 2007/9/23 3:25
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/1/21
From: England
Posts: 4117
 Another blockbuster from your mind
Sorry use the same words, but Awesome !!!
Joseph33759
Posted: 2007/7/3 8:26  Updated: 2007/7/3 8:26
Virgin
Joined: 2007/7/3
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 From one writer to another
Though I do not write this kind of stuff you seem to have a gift with it keep it up
dhamphere90
Posted: 2007/6/18 18:53  Updated: 2007/6/18 18:53
Virgin
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 wow
That was an amazing tale. You capture the emotions and sensations and let them tell the story for you. you can sense the true love behind the actions, and that adds a whole new texture to the telling. You write very well. keep up the good work.
plicker69
Posted: 2007/6/6 1:51  Updated: 2007/6/6 1:51
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/4/16
From: UK Midlands
Posts: 161
 Beautiful
Thank you Skyy for a deliciously erotic story. What happened reminded me of happy days.
thinksexy
Posted: 2007/5/6 20:45  Updated: 2007/5/6 20:45
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/12/17
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 Skyybird...
Your main character was so sweet, I was rooting for her the whole time! Very romantic and well told.
Lee
Posted: 2007/5/4 12:04  Updated: 2007/5/4 12:04
Bookworm
Joined: 2006/10/25
From: Chicago
Posts: 91
 A first time to remember
Sky, this has been your finest story that I have read today. It contained all the feelings of a first time, and a first love. Plus you did it with the details and feelings, as well as the fears and tears of the first timer! Almost as if to say that this is a personal story. L loved it baby and I can only hope that the other storys are as great as this one was! Keep it up, and you'll keep me up too! Lee
sugarsweet
Posted: 2007/4/7 4:58  Updated: 2007/4/7 4:58
Virgin
Joined: 2005/12/7
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 amazing
I hope my first time will be like this...it sounds perfect
jtweety
Posted: 2007/3/10 20:58  Updated: 2007/3/10 20:58
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/9/27
From: Gilroy, CA
Posts: 195
 Awe sweetie you made me cry
Wonderfully written, reminded me of that first experience. I really enjoye d it, great job. Keep up the good work we all want to hear more!!!
runeblade
Posted: 2007/3/10 20:27  Updated: 2007/3/10 20:27
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/2/9
From: Canada
Posts: 450
 yummy
Nice...enjoyed that!
tom thumper
Posted: 2007/3/8 14:51  Updated: 2007/3/8 14:51
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/12/20
From: left coast of Canada
Posts: 219
 Romantic erotic!
A verrry good story! I like the romantic bookends of the story in combinat ion with the incredible sexiness of the innocent first timer. Keep up the good work!
pinksapphire
Posted: 2007/3/8 14:49  Updated: 2007/3/8 14:49
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 well done
very good skyy.....definitely worth reading ...thanx babes!
sailor
Posted: 2007/3/7 19:37  Updated: 2007/3/7 19:37
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2005/12/11
From: East coast USA
Posts: 435
 Love it!
..ummm could easily be someone's first time for real... yours perhaps, Sk y?
will7567
Posted: 2007/3/5 17:39  Updated: 2007/3/5 17:39
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Joined: 2006/8/11
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 great
This was a really good story.I lover it.Keep it up you are a natural to thi s writing thing.