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| kit_cat932003 |
Posted: 2010/1/1 20:54 Updated: 2010/1/1 20:54 |
Virgin   Joined: 2009/12/29 From: Posts: 1 |
 speechless... This was amazingly written & it's such a beautiful but sad story, tht is a love
everyone longs for & you found a glorious way to put it into word... Bravo, can't
wait to read more =)
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| Flirtatious one |
Posted: 2009/10/28 21:28 Updated: 2009/10/28 21:28 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2008/10/30 From: Posts: 684 |
 Great one.. It was beautifully written. It tugged at my heart and brought tears to my eyes.
I look forward to your next submission. You are truly gifted. Thank you.
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| PortlyStallion |
Posted: 2009/9/19 1:29 Updated: 2009/9/19 1:29 |
Virgin   Joined: 2009/9/15 From: Posts: 6 |
 Wow You know, I wasn't going to read this simply because of how it made my wife,
Morbid, cry. But this was just a beautiful story. It made me think of her and
how I would feel, but at the same time it made me treasure our love so much more.
(If that was even possible. lol) I did read the first one and didn't think the
second was very fair, but you pulled this off just swimmingly and I really enjoyed
it.
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| javasnob |
Posted: 2009/9/5 18:22 Updated: 2009/9/5 18:22 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2009/1/24 From: the Island of Misfit Toys Posts: 1601 |
 what a story i must say, i sure didn't see that coming! although it was sad, you kept their
love true and pure all the way to the end. Great writing skills!
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| Shinzon |
Posted: 2009/7/15 22:41 Updated: 2009/7/15 22:41 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/10/5 From: Neutral Zone Posts: 230 |
 Truly amazing love story Part 1 of your story touched my mind but part 2 penetrated my heart. You pulled
me into their lives. I lived their passion, their love. I felt her pain. I laughed
as well as cried and through them I saw life a little differently. Exceptional
job Woman! Thank you for writing but more importantly thank you for sharing.
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| Pensuwana |
Posted: 2009/7/12 10:11 Updated: 2009/7/12 10:11 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/1/19 From: In a lustful state of erotic delirium Posts: 3225 |
 wow!!! how can dumb little me add to what has been said, as we all know you are such
a talent, such a loving, wonderful person, thank you Gabryella, for another truly
amazing story
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| oxfordrhythm |
Posted: 2009/7/11 14:37 Updated: 2009/7/11 14:37 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/7/24 From: somwhere between church and state... Posts: 2186 |
 beautifically creative and romantic! wow! what an awesome ending! i curled up with your story with a glass of wine
and a jumbo box of tissues and loved every word. One thing i particularly enjoyed
was the fact that every time i thought i knew what was going to happen, you would
twist the plot and surprise me. it's so refreshing to see such a creative departure
from the typical erotica published here. I hope this inspires others to approach
their writing a little more outside the box. ~xoxoxoxy
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| buddha1701d |
Posted: 2009/7/11 12:25 Updated: 2009/7/11 12:25 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/8/29 From: Texas Posts: 558 |
 Lovely What a beautiful ending. I love the irony of conclusion. The universe TRULY does
work in mysterious ways. Fate, what a cruel bitch she can be!
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| fanaticalhorse |
Posted: 2009/7/10 7:14 Updated: 2009/7/10 7:14 |
Virgin   Joined: 2008/1/3 From: Dublin Ireland Posts: 8 |
 wow stunning stuff.... part 2 not exactly what u expect but wow, amazing beautiful
end.. come for the erotica stay for the gripping story thanks so much Woman xxx
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| **teach** |
Posted: 2009/7/3 19:54 Updated: 2009/7/3 19:54 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/5/19 From: In the night sky Posts: 2010 |
 tissues Thanks for the warning... they were deffinately needed. I so glad I could read
the whole thing in 1 sitting. So DEAR lady..... When does it go to the publishers???
Please let me know. In a word.....mmmmmm...hehe....er....ummm... OOooh my. *sniffles*
GREAT JOB!!
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| elixer |
Posted: 2009/7/2 15:04 Updated: 2009/7/2 15:04 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/5/24 From: FL Posts: 4 |
 Great writing First of all congratulations! I am charmed by the minute details that bring out
the your imaginations so well. I was glued to the pages unbroken. It felt like
I was in the real world.
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| technospud |
Posted: 2009/7/2 8:39 Updated: 2009/7/2 8:39 |
Virgin   Joined: 2009/7/1 From: Posts: 6 |
 omg omg you should have warned me I would need tissues! So filled with emotion---wet
at both ends!
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| Rotsen |
Posted: 2009/6/29 15:26 Updated: 2009/6/29 15:26 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2008/7/29 From: Eastern PA Posts: 642 |
 Wow! An Epic Accomplishment! Congratulations Woman.
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| Spanky |
Posted: 2009/6/26 12:39 Updated: 2009/6/26 12:39 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2005/12/28 From: Aus Posts: 109 |
 True Epic Story Its wonderful to see that you have put so much time and effort into producing
a wonderful story that takes you on an intense journey. Just Brilliant xo
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| dazzle_me |
Posted: 2009/6/25 17:06 Updated: 2009/6/25 17:06 |
Virgin   Joined: 2009/6/25 From: Posts: 12 |
 tragic romance loved it so much I cried! Can't wait to read the other stories you have written!
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| dazzle_me |
Posted: 2009/6/25 17:05 Updated: 2009/6/25 17:05 |
Virgin   Joined: 2009/6/25 From: Posts: 12 |
 part 1 very good. Like the details. Can't wait for part 2
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| geobob |
Posted: 2009/6/24 15:58 Updated: 2009/6/24 15:58 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/4/16 From: San Marcos, Tx Posts: 257 |
 Well done, woman! A really great story, and with, life lessons yet.
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| Eric |
Posted: 2009/6/24 6:17 Updated: 2009/6/24 6:17 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/7/24 From: cyberspace Posts: 2219 |
 "The Magic Touch" "My heart has been your wife since the moment we met. The rest is just legal
mumbo jumbo. You will be calling me mother possibly sooner than you think." These
are Gwen's parting words to her husband-to-be, Theo. They also could be the words
she uses when she reawakens to her life, to her calling. No she was not to fulfill
that initial dream per se but she was able to use it to drive her to see the
need for her "magic touch." It is the touch of those few great people who can
transform lives for the better. By writing this story at this time in history,
when humanity needs its best to step forward like Gwen and bring it healing and
spiritual elevation, this story is not only beautifully written and developed,
but shows us all how we can take even the death of the person we love most in
this world and use it to motivate us to greatness. It is an sweet piece of erotica,
a lesson in loving, a lesson in living and dieing, and how to give our lives
and the lives of others meaning in the worst of times. It is then that we are
called to what makes us great as a species. Woman darling, your life in China,
came through bright and clear in this story. Thank you for being the great lady
you are and not only setting an example for us, but for putting it into words
we can all see. I also thought the setting of India was a good place to have
all the mind states develop! Nice touch! lol Yes your laughter is infectious
and always has been. Those you help, have tears of joy for everything you have
chosen to give them whether they see it overtly or not. They are lucky you were
born. This story was nothing short of beautiful and inspiring. eric
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| wyliecoyote |
Posted: 2009/6/23 20:47 Updated: 2009/6/23 20:47 |
Moderator   Joined: 2008/2/22 From: on the road to nowhere Posts: 1209 |
 And i knew what was coming... ... wipes a tear from his eye. 10/10
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| daydream |
Posted: 2009/6/23 14:33 Updated: 2009/6/23 14:33 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/11/29 From: Somewere she has never been happier to be Posts: 424 |
 Well Woman You know exaclty what i think of your story and how amazing it is.. its like
you utterly fantastic. I love this story and it reads so well. i really think
its time you got yourself a publisher and write yourself a book with utter belif
in you DD
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| tail gunner |
Posted: 2009/6/23 12:33 Updated: 2009/6/23 12:33 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2008/6/28 From: the great American southland Posts: 1147 |
 great stuff woman ! ... we will all be looking for this in hard-back! ... keep up the good
work.
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| Osiris18 |
Posted: 2009/6/23 9:31 Updated: 2009/6/23 9:31 |
Flirt   Joined: 2008/12/26 From: california Posts: 30 |
 Finale This is an amazing piece of literature. It was so beautiful and still so sad.
i actually cried at the end i never cry in this story. this is a top of the list
story. please keep writing i love your stories
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| Wabbit |
Posted: 2009/6/23 8:22 Updated: 2009/6/23 8:22 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/1/23 From: In the shadows Posts: 1097 |
 Truely Amazing Woman, you have reduced me to tears and inspired my heart to love more today
for you do not know if tomorrow will come. This story was amazing from start
to finish and so touching, I think I can hear hearts breaking as it's read. Thank
you for sharing this with us. Wabbs xxxxx
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| 8PUSSIES |
Posted: 2009/6/23 0:32 Updated: 2009/6/23 0:32 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2009/1/22 From: frolicking naked in the forest . . . Posts: 7291 |
 Bittersweet-- Your touching tale explodes with even greater talent in your second installment.
You handle the transitions fluidly and with style. The words flow smoothly, carrying
the reader across worlds and emotions. Beautifully done. -------8
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| Alexandra_M |
Posted: 2009/6/22 18:17 Updated: 2009/6/22 18:17 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/1/16 From: East of the Moon Posts: 1423 |
 The most amazing story! Thank you Woman for making me laugh and cry and experience a whole range of emotions
in between. Love Alexa
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| sweet_P |
Posted: 2009/6/22 11:52 Updated: 2009/6/22 11:52 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2009/5/18 From: USA Posts: 421 |
 tissues, please What a beautiful tragic story! I was glued to the pages in shock and disbelief
and in hope that I misunderstood something. Some of the best stories have a tragic
side to them. The hours you must have spent crafting this is unfathomable. Very
romantic, very emotional, very good Woman. Had to grab the tissues as the tears
kept falling. We all have hopes and dreams for what might have been. Thank you
for this beautiful, touching story.
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| peachiebaby |
Posted: 2009/6/22 11:33 Updated: 2009/6/22 11:33 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2008/4/26 From: In your dreams love, in your dreams Posts: 323 |
 ......... ...........I am at a loss for words. As I sit here with tears streaming down
my face.........I really don't know how to put into words the way I am feeling.
I had a dreaded feeling in the back of my mind that something bad was going to
happen, I was hopeing and praying with all that I am that nothing bad would.
Woman well done. That sounds so trite, but it is all that I can offer at the
moment. Well done! Kisses and tears Peachie
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| Woman |
Posted: 2009/6/22 11:22 Updated: 2009/6/22 11:22 |
Chat Moderator   Joined: 2008/8/11 From: The Interrogation Room Posts: 1502 |
 Thank-you!!! I just wanted to make it official and say thank-you to a few of you. You know
who you are; My Darling King of the Funny People, you are so much more than just
Bernie to me! To the only man who can ASL me, but never does, thank-you for the
idea of making it all senseless. And finally; the man who inspired it all. By
the way, thank-you for reading forty-something pages, I just hope you enjoyed
it!
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| lovtobescrewed |
Posted: 2009/6/22 10:50 Updated: 2009/6/22 10:50 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/10/31 From: Posts: 2 |
 Awesome This is great stuff. You are very talented. Looking forward to more writings
from you
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