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Straight: Serial Stories:
  A Dream to Build a Life On:
    A Dream to Build a Life On, Part I (1/19)  

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Author: Woman  Published: 6/18/2009  story views: 5608
 
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    They move across the dance floor, perfectly fitted to each other.  Cheek to cheek they dance.  To the music they sway.  He in black tux, bow tie and all, she in a crimson gown, fitted embroidered bodice, with a flowing floor length skirt, showing off all the assets she was given in life.  Her long auburn hair is piled high upon her head, soft curls floating around her face. 

    Together they dance.  Not noticing anyone else in the room.  No one else exists. Their hearts beat together in time. 

    The band stops suddenly, as they both blink as they look into each other’s eyes. 

    "Wow."  She sighs into his ear. 

    "Wow indeed! What happened?" he asks, somewhat still in a daze. 

    "I feel as if time just stopped.  That’s never happened to me before."  She gently leans back to look into his sea-blue eyes.  Her large green eyes lock onto his, as they both smile knowingly at each other.   

    Their bodies start to sway in time once more as the band begins again.  Still looking at each other, their arms around each other, lost to the rest of the room.  Her long gloved hands, one resting around on his shoulder the other clasped snugly in his hand, his strong hands, one holding hers gently, the other around her waist holding her tightly, afraid if he were to let her go, she would fly away. 

    Time passes, and still they move to the music. The onlookers smile knowingly at them, knowing that there is something happening between them. Something new, something special. 

    Crystal smiles at them, then quickly kisses Frank, her new husband saying, “I knew we’d find someone special for her!” 

    Frank smiles lovingly at his new bride. “Who would’ve thought that the two of them though? I thought Christopher was more her type. Do you think they even know each other’s names yet?” He chuckles as Crystal stands, shrugs, taking Frank’s hand, leading him out to the dance floor. 

    They make their way to the dance floor, both of them wearing large smiles at finally being married, and seeing two of their good friends hitting it off. For the next thirty minutes, they dance around their friends, trying to make eye contact, share smiles with them, but the two of them are lost in their own world. She in crimson, him in black. Not speaking, just caught up in their bodies spinning, the rest of the room blurs, becomes silent as they only can see as far as the other.   

    “Alright! Clear the dance floor please! The midnight buffet is about to be set up, and there will be some food for all you hungry folks out there!” The guests at Frank and Crystal’s wedding cheer, their want of food far louder than that of the murmured groans of happy couples dancing. 

    The man in black takes the silk-covered hand of the woman in crimson, leading her out the doors. Seeking the fresh crisp air outside, they walk together out of

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    javasnob
    Posted: 2009/9/5 17:57  Updated: 2009/9/5 17:57
    Lusty Librarian's Pet
    Joined: 2009/1/24
    From: wherever you want me to be
    Posts: 1246
     Passionate
    A thrilling tale of undying love. Well, written, woman! On my way to reading part 2. Does it get any better? I think it will...
    MorbidFantasy
    Posted: 2009/7/13 20:19  Updated: 2009/7/13 20:19
    Lusty Librarian's Pet
    Joined: 2007/8/31
    From: In arms that won't break me
    Posts: 370
     Now that was a read.
    Jeez. You know I have to be honest. I was going to pass this one up because it was so long, but once I started reading, I couldn't stop! That was amazing! I can't wait to read the next one, but I probably will take a few minutes of a break between them. This was extremely good!
    HK
    Posted: 2009/7/12 10:47  Updated: 2009/7/12 10:47
    Bookworm
    Joined: 2007/2/16
    From: Down Under
    Posts: 72
     Steamy
    what a full throttle ride of passion woman. I thought it was soo sexy the way you built the passion and tension to boiling point. I t sure got a positive reaction from me.........ahem
    buddha1701d
    Posted: 2009/7/11 10:57  Updated: 2009/7/11 10:57
    Lusty Librarian's Pet
    Joined: 2006/8/29
    From: Texas
    Posts: 556
     Wow!
    Very romantic and hot at the same time! Can't wait to move on to part two.
    fanaticalhorse
    Posted: 2009/7/10 7:23  Updated: 2009/7/10 7:23
    Virgin
    Joined: 2008/1/3
    From: Dublin Ireland
    Posts: 7
     Woman this is stunning
    i cannot describe here in detail what this story has done to me- i feel like i have had a mindblowing sexual and emotional experience... Thank you Woman you are the best Jack xxx
    **teach**
    Posted: 2009/7/3 19:46  Updated: 2009/7/3 19:46
    Lusty Librarian's Pet
    Joined: 2007/5/19
    From:
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     OOOOOOoooooooooooooh my!!
    To have what they have... I will give away all my stars................!!! Holy cow lady !!! One really sweet an HOTT story!! Thank you!
    HonestReader
    Posted: 2009/7/2 19:01  Updated: 2009/7/2 19:01
    Virgin
    Joined: 2009/7/2
    From:
    Posts: 1
     Not the best..
    If I'm honest this is one of the worst stories ive read. its boring, tacky and un necessarily long. Please consider revising and shortening on your next entry.
    technospud
    Posted: 2009/7/2 8:33  Updated: 2009/7/2 8:33
    Virgin
    Joined: 2009/7/1
    From:
    Posts: 6
     wow
    This was so hot! I wish I was Gwen! Thanks for telling me it was here Woman!
    Arwen
    Posted: 2009/6/26 6:19  Updated: 2009/6/26 6:19
    Bookworm
    Joined: 2007/11/19
    From: Middle Earth
    Posts: 135
     lost for words
    what an amazing and arousing story Woman. can't wait to read part 2. i can only hope my writting will sometime become as great as yours. Arwen xoxoxo
    rain_goddess
    Posted: 2009/6/26 1:37  Updated: 2009/6/26 1:37
    Up and Comer
    Joined: 2006/2/25
    From: Wherever my thoughts lead me
    Posts: 46
     Brava!
    I loved this story, both parts. I laughed, I cried and I jumped for joy. You write so eloquently on one hand but so smutty on the other and I love it! Amazing darling amazing.
    oxfordrhythm
    Posted: 2009/6/23 12:09  Updated: 2009/6/23 12:09
    Lusty Librarian's Pet
    Joined: 2006/7/24
    From: somwhere between church and state...
    Posts: 2122
     woman!!
    this was a wonderful read, woman! you strike such a nice balance (and contrast) between tender romance and wild, unadulterated raunchy sex. it feels like a modern-day erotic fairy tale. it's refreshing! nice work! :-)
    geobob
    Posted: 2009/6/23 11:47  Updated: 2009/6/23 11:47
    Lusty Librarian's Pet
    Joined: 2007/4/16
    From: San Marcos, Tx
    Posts: 253
     all consuming
    you told it so very well. it made me revisit my wonderful, terrible youth, woman.
    8PUSSIES
    Posted: 2009/6/22 23:33  Updated: 2009/6/22 23:33
    Lusty Librarian's Pet
    Joined: 2009/1/22
    From: frolicking naked in the forest . . .
    Posts: 7241
     Made for each other--
    Passionate and eloquent, a beautiful story told with style and grace. Thank you. -----8
    vinciblesatyr
    Posted: 2009/6/22 19:23  Updated: 2009/6/22 19:23
    Bookworm
    Joined: 2006/12/2
    From: Maryland
    Posts: 71
     such a romantic story!
    Woman! You are a gifted writer, but I envision you in a black formal dress instead of the red. I wish I could be your lover in this story. So warm, so loving, so perfect! Vince.
    Eric
    Posted: 2009/6/22 10:08  Updated: 2009/6/22 10:08
    Lusty Librarian's Pet
    Joined: 2006/7/24
    From: cyberspace
    Posts: 2219
     A Dream to Build A Life On
    Woman darling you know I am going to tell you this is a remarkably written story and that your style has improved since your earliest writings here. Yes it was well written and hot, and romantic as everyone says. But what really got me is the way the two characters emerge, especially Gwen, and the way Theo knows her and affirms every bit of her depth as revealed here. She knows he is captivated by her looks, her body, her way of love making and her love for him. But he also knows that the same childlike person who is so utterly enchanted by him, can laugh, can feel the bitter sweetness of life but also can have her truly womanly love for those in need. She is needy, he is needy, but so are others she will soon fly to help for nearly a month. As much as she loves him, she loves her womanhood and need to help and nurture others to a better life, and that is the woman HE loves too. So what drives this is not just the erotic and romantic element of the characters in it but her commitment to others as well and they way he loves all of her. Moreover, he takes it on as his project too through her and says he will tie her to the seat if he has to. Her response gives it away. So it is not just anyone who writes this. Not just any story has been written either. It shows what an incredible womanly human being you are Woman darling, full of love and passion but more, full of laughter, mischief, and compassion for others even when it hurts her. Very few other women could have written this here. My sincere admiration and gratitude for the hope it shows for any woman who reads it. You are showing the way my good lady.
    Osiris18
    Posted: 2009/6/22 5:14  Updated: 2009/6/22 5:14
    Flirt
    Joined: 2008/12/26
    From: california
    Posts: 23
     Easily best of the best!
    This is an amazing story! i love it. Romantic, Detailed, Captureing! I cant wait for the next part! A great story!
    sloc
    Posted: 2009/6/21 17:58  Updated: 2009/6/21 17:58
    Lusty Librarian's Pet
    Joined: 2009/4/23
    From: Switzerland
    Posts: 415
     beautiful
    that was beautiful, a great mixture of romance and erotica. It expresses both great feelings, tenderness and longing :) Looking forward to the next part!
    lovtobescrewed
    Posted: 2009/6/21 13:40  Updated: 2009/6/21 13:40
    Virgin
    Joined: 2007/10/31
    From:
    Posts: 2
     Well-done
    Good stuff. Definitely award winning. Keep it going in the second part. Looking forward for it. You can always be my Gwen
    Whoreyslutress.
    Posted: 2009/6/20 23:30  Updated: 2009/6/20 23:30
    Virgin
    Joined: 2009/6/13
    From:
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     Oh..my...
    definatly jizzed in my pants on this one folks.. lol.. but seriously woman.. this is fantastic... breathtaking to say the least...
    LeZz
    Posted: 2009/6/20 0:36  Updated: 2009/6/20 0:36
    Bookworm
    Joined: 2009/1/10
    From: inbetween worlds cnt decide which one to stay in
    Posts: 81
     Uuuuhhhhh......
    holy fuck...i have to say that this story is probably gettin better after each time i read it..which this wld b the 3rd time...i seriously wld say that i wld like it better if it were a lesbian story but i would b lyin...i love this!!! i sat here for like 10 mins speechless b4 i cld even think abt commenting...i love this!
    wyliecoyote
    Posted: 2009/6/19 19:22  Updated: 2009/6/19 19:22
    Lusty Librarian's Pet
    Joined: 2008/2/22
    From: on the road to nowhere
    Posts: 1196
     I so can't wait...
    You already knew what i thought of this story. It reads even better the second time. Ans as for part 2...
    jakie
    Posted: 2009/6/19 17:03  Updated: 2009/6/19 17:03
    Lusty Librarian's Pet
    Joined: 2006/1/29
    From: USA - State known for "Big"
    Posts: 274
     A Dream to build on....
    Well done Lovely Woman. I felt the passion and excitement of new romance from beginning to end. Excellent balance of emotions. I can only say more...more...
    Broadway_Betty
    Posted: 2009/6/19 4:26  Updated: 2009/6/19 4:26
    Lusty Librarian's Pet
    Joined: 2007/5/4
    From: Gotham...
    Posts: 466
     O.M.G!
    You're finally published!!!!!! You already know what i think lovely, so there's really no use reitterating anything except i am so proud of you darling, it's a work of art. XX BB
    stillpure
    Posted: 2009/6/19 0:45  Updated: 2009/6/19 0:45
    Lusty Librarian's Pet
    Joined: 2008/1/12
    From: NY
    Posts: 5918
     ...
    Looong stories usually put me off because there are so many unnecessary extra details and events. But this one was only sensual erotica and heart-felt romance. Very well written story, Woman.
    sweet_P
    Posted: 2009/6/18 23:46  Updated: 2009/6/18 23:46
    Lusty Librarian's Pet
    Joined: 2009/5/18
    From: USA
    Posts: 372
     Wow!
    Wow! This was so amazing Woman! I loved the characters, they are so well suited to each other! Details make it very real, make me wishing I had what she has! The balance between the humor and the sensual is perfect! I loved this! Was sad it was only a part 1. Can't wait to read part 2! Kudos to you! and thank you for this addition to the library.
    peachiebaby
    Posted: 2009/6/18 21:37  Updated: 2009/6/18 21:37
    Lusty Librarian's Pet
    Joined: 2008/4/26
    From: In your dreams love, in your dreams
    Posts: 323
     I want...........
    that....................breathtakingly beautiful, soul connecting love. Woman you never cease to amaze me. It took my breath away and made me wish for the exact same thing. Please please please I want the same thing! Brilliant. Kisses Peachie
    Pensuwana
    Posted: 2009/6/18 18:51  Updated: 2009/6/18 18:51
    Lusty Librarian's Pet
    Joined: 2007/1/19
    From: In a lustful state of erotic delirium
    Posts: 3214
     so very well written
    pure perfection, just as the writer, very good gabryella, very good
    Wabbit
    Posted: 2009/6/18 18:07  Updated: 2009/6/18 18:07
    Lusty Librarian's Pet
    Joined: 2007/1/23
    From: In the shadows
    Posts: 1098
     Oh My...
    Woman.. you take my breath away! That was one hot and wonderfully written story! More!!!!