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| javasnob |
Posted: 2009/9/5 17:57 Updated: 2009/9/5 17:57 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2009/1/24 From: wherever you want me to be Posts: 1246 |
 Passionate A thrilling tale of undying love. Well, written, woman! On my way to reading
part 2. Does it get any better? I think it will...
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| MorbidFantasy |
Posted: 2009/7/13 20:19 Updated: 2009/7/13 20:19 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/8/31 From: In arms that won't break me Posts: 370 |
 Now that was a read. Jeez. You know I have to be honest. I was going to pass this one up because it
was so long, but once I started reading, I couldn't stop! That was amazing! I
can't wait to read the next one, but I probably will take a few minutes of a
break between them. This was extremely good!
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| HK |
Posted: 2009/7/12 10:47 Updated: 2009/7/12 10:47 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2007/2/16 From: Down Under Posts: 72 |
 Steamy what a full throttle ride of passion woman. I thought it was soo sexy the way
you built the passion and tension to boiling point. I t sure got a positive reaction
from me.........ahem
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| buddha1701d |
Posted: 2009/7/11 10:57 Updated: 2009/7/11 10:57 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/8/29 From: Texas Posts: 556 |
 Wow! Very romantic and hot at the same time! Can't wait to move on to part two.
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| fanaticalhorse |
Posted: 2009/7/10 7:23 Updated: 2009/7/10 7:23 |
Virgin   Joined: 2008/1/3 From: Dublin Ireland Posts: 7 |
 Woman this is stunning i cannot describe here in detail what this story has done to me- i feel like
i have had a mindblowing sexual and emotional experience... Thank you Woman you
are the best Jack xxx
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| **teach** |
Posted: 2009/7/3 19:46 Updated: 2009/7/3 19:46 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/5/19 From: Posts: 1899 |
 OOOOOOoooooooooooooh my!! To have what they have... I will give away all my stars................!!! Holy
cow lady !!! One really sweet an HOTT story!! Thank you!
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| HonestReader |
Posted: 2009/7/2 19:01 Updated: 2009/7/2 19:01 |
Virgin   Joined: 2009/7/2 From: Posts: 1 |
 Not the best.. If I'm honest this is one of the worst stories ive read. its boring, tacky and
un necessarily long. Please consider revising and shortening on your next entry.
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| technospud |
Posted: 2009/7/2 8:33 Updated: 2009/7/2 8:33 |
Virgin   Joined: 2009/7/1 From: Posts: 6 |
 wow This was so hot! I wish I was Gwen! Thanks for telling me it was here Woman!
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| Arwen |
Posted: 2009/6/26 6:19 Updated: 2009/6/26 6:19 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2007/11/19 From: Middle Earth Posts: 135 |
 lost for words what an amazing and arousing story Woman. can't wait to read part 2. i can only
hope my writting will sometime become as great as yours. Arwen xoxoxo
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| rain_goddess |
Posted: 2009/6/26 1:37 Updated: 2009/6/26 1:37 |
Up and Comer   Joined: 2006/2/25 From: Wherever my thoughts lead me Posts: 46 |
 Brava! I loved this story, both parts. I laughed, I cried and I jumped for joy. You
write so eloquently on one hand but so smutty on the other and I love it! Amazing
darling amazing.
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| oxfordrhythm |
Posted: 2009/6/23 12:09 Updated: 2009/6/23 12:09 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/7/24 From: somwhere between church and state... Posts: 2122 |
 woman!! this was a wonderful read, woman! you strike such a nice balance (and contrast)
between tender romance and wild, unadulterated raunchy sex. it feels like a modern-day
erotic fairy tale. it's refreshing! nice work! :-)
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| geobob |
Posted: 2009/6/23 11:47 Updated: 2009/6/23 11:47 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/4/16 From: San Marcos, Tx Posts: 253 |
 all consuming you told it so very well. it made me revisit my wonderful, terrible youth, woman.
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| 8PUSSIES |
Posted: 2009/6/22 23:33 Updated: 2009/6/22 23:33 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2009/1/22 From: frolicking naked in the forest . . . Posts: 7241 |
 Made for each other-- Passionate and eloquent, a beautiful story told with style and grace. Thank you.
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| vinciblesatyr |
Posted: 2009/6/22 19:23 Updated: 2009/6/22 19:23 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2006/12/2 From: Maryland Posts: 71 |
 such a romantic story! Woman! You are a gifted writer, but I envision you in a black formal dress instead
of the red. I wish I could be your lover in this story. So warm, so loving, so
perfect! Vince.
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| Eric |
Posted: 2009/6/22 10:08 Updated: 2009/6/22 10:08 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/7/24 From: cyberspace Posts: 2219 |
 A Dream to Build A Life On Woman darling you know I am going to tell you this is a remarkably written story
and that your style has improved since your earliest writings here. Yes it was
well written and hot, and romantic as everyone says. But what really got me is
the way the two characters emerge, especially Gwen, and the way Theo knows her
and affirms every bit of her depth as revealed here. She knows he is captivated
by her looks, her body, her way of love making and her love for him. But he also
knows that the same childlike person who is so utterly enchanted by him, can
laugh, can feel the bitter sweetness of life but also can have her truly womanly
love for those in need. She is needy, he is needy, but so are others she will
soon fly to help for nearly a month. As much as she loves him, she loves her
womanhood and need to help and nurture others to a better life, and that is the
woman HE loves too. So what drives this is not just the erotic and romantic element
of the characters in it but her commitment to others as well and they way he
loves all of her. Moreover, he takes it on as his project too through her and
says he will tie her to the seat if he has to. Her response gives it away. So
it is not just anyone who writes this. Not just any story has been written either.
It shows what an incredible womanly human being you are Woman darling, full of
love and passion but more, full of laughter, mischief, and compassion for others
even when it hurts her. Very few other women could have written this here. My
sincere admiration and gratitude for the hope it shows for any woman who reads
it. You are showing the way my good lady.
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| Osiris18 |
Posted: 2009/6/22 5:14 Updated: 2009/6/22 5:14 |
Flirt   Joined: 2008/12/26 From: california Posts: 23 |
 Easily best of the best! This is an amazing story! i love it. Romantic, Detailed, Captureing! I cant wait
for the next part! A great story!
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| sloc |
Posted: 2009/6/21 17:58 Updated: 2009/6/21 17:58 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2009/4/23 From: Switzerland Posts: 415 |
 beautiful that was beautiful, a great mixture of romance and erotica. It expresses both
great feelings, tenderness and longing :) Looking forward to the next part!
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| lovtobescrewed |
Posted: 2009/6/21 13:40 Updated: 2009/6/21 13:40 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/10/31 From: Posts: 2 |
 Well-done Good stuff. Definitely award winning. Keep it going in the second part. Looking
forward for it. You can always be my Gwen
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| Whoreyslutress. |
Posted: 2009/6/20 23:30 Updated: 2009/6/20 23:30 |
Virgin   Joined: 2009/6/13 From: Posts: 1 |
 Oh..my... definatly jizzed in my pants on this one folks.. lol.. but seriously woman..
this is fantastic... breathtaking to say the least...
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| LeZz |
Posted: 2009/6/20 0:36 Updated: 2009/6/20 0:36 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2009/1/10 From: inbetween worlds cnt decide which one to stay in Posts: 81 |
 Uuuuhhhhh...... holy fuck...i have to say that this story is probably gettin better after each
time i read it..which this wld b the 3rd time...i seriously wld say that i wld
like it better if it were a lesbian story but i would b lyin...i love this!!!
i sat here for like 10 mins speechless b4 i cld even think abt commenting...i
love this!
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| wyliecoyote |
Posted: 2009/6/19 19:22 Updated: 2009/6/19 19:22 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2008/2/22 From: on the road to nowhere Posts: 1196 |
 I so can't wait... You already knew what i thought of this story. It reads even better the second
time. Ans as for part 2...
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| jakie |
Posted: 2009/6/19 17:03 Updated: 2009/6/19 17:03 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/1/29 From: USA - State known for "Big" Posts: 274 |
 A Dream to build on.... Well done Lovely Woman. I felt the passion and excitement of new romance from
beginning to end. Excellent balance of emotions. I can only say more...more...
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| Broadway_Betty |
Posted: 2009/6/19 4:26 Updated: 2009/6/19 4:26 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/5/4 From: Gotham... Posts: 466 |
 O.M.G! You're finally published!!!!!! You already know what i think lovely, so there's
really no use reitterating anything except i am so proud of you darling, it's
a work of art. XX BB
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| stillpure |
Posted: 2009/6/19 0:45 Updated: 2009/6/19 0:45 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2008/1/12 From: NY Posts: 5918 |
 ... Looong stories usually put me off because there are so many unnecessary extra
details and events. But this one was only sensual erotica and heart-felt romance.
Very well written story, Woman.
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| sweet_P |
Posted: 2009/6/18 23:46 Updated: 2009/6/18 23:46 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2009/5/18 From: USA Posts: 372 |
 Wow! Wow! This was so amazing Woman! I loved the characters, they are so well suited
to each other! Details make it very real, make me wishing I had what she has!
The balance between the humor and the sensual is perfect! I loved this! Was sad
it was only a part 1. Can't wait to read part 2! Kudos to you! and thank you
for this addition to the library.
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| peachiebaby |
Posted: 2009/6/18 21:37 Updated: 2009/6/18 21:37 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2008/4/26 From: In your dreams love, in your dreams Posts: 323 |
 I want........... that....................breathtakingly beautiful, soul connecting love. Woman
you never cease to amaze me. It took my breath away and made me wish for the
exact same thing. Please please please I want the same thing! Brilliant. Kisses
Peachie
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| Pensuwana |
Posted: 2009/6/18 18:51 Updated: 2009/6/18 18:51 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/1/19 From: In a lustful state of erotic delirium Posts: 3214 |
 so very well written pure perfection, just as the writer, very good gabryella, very good
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| Wabbit |
Posted: 2009/6/18 18:07 Updated: 2009/6/18 18:07 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/1/23 From: In the shadows Posts: 1098 |
 Oh My... Woman.. you take my breath away! That was one hot and wonderfully written story!
More!!!!
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