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Straight: Serial Stories:
  Ruin:
    Ruin, Chapter Five (1/3)  

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Author: Rotsen  Published: 12/21/2009  story views: 9666
 
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  • Chapter 1: Ruin, Chapter One
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  • Chapter 2: Ruin, Chapter Two
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  • Chapter 3: Ruin, Chapter Three
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  • Chapter 4: Ruin, Chapter Four
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  • Chapter 5: Ruin, Chapter Five
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    Lusty Librarian's Note: I have named this the Story of the Week, which is really an award for the entire series, and if you haven't read parts 1-4, then I recommend not reading this until you've finished with all the others.

    RUIN

    Chapter Five
    Pieces

    On Thursday Alicia sent a text to my phone asking me to call her cell. When I did she told me one of her friends took her to lunch to tell her that there was talk in the neighborhood that Phil was having an affair. Feigning shock, Alicia said she expectantly waited for the friend to tell her about Kate. She truly was shocked when the neighbor instead named Lynn Stevens, the redhead who had just moved into the house next door to the Johnstons a few weeks earlier. “It must have begun this week while I was at my sister’s,” Alicia said.

    Later that evening as Kate and I walked through the cold evening air to the Johnsons' house for the Christmas party, I told her the recent gossip I had learned. “I heard that Phil Gladford was having an affair,” I said lightly. Out of the corner of my eye I could see Katie pull in her chin. I could feel her stiffen.

    “Really?”

    “That’s what I heard.”

    “With someone we know?”

    “The new redhead of the couple that just moved into the neighborhood. The Stevens? Yeah I think that’s their name.”

    “Really…” Kate repeated more as a statement than a question.

    “Guy’s nuts to be foolin’ around on such a pretty wife, if you ask me,” I said without being able to detect another reaction.

    By the time Katie and I arrived at the Johnstons' neighborhood Christmas party it was already crowded and in full cheer. We greeted a number of neighbors on our slow progression to one of the “bars.” I scanned each room we passed for Alicia and I could tell Katie was scanning as well. I saw Phil in the study as we passed by. He was talking with Lynn, the redhead in question. Katie didn’t see either of them; a woman passing in the other direction blocked her view into the room. We proceeded to the bar set up in the dining room. Alicia was there involved in a conversation with three other women. As soon as she saw us she greeted us cheerfully and the other women did too.

    I held up my hands. “First things first, I’m going to the bar, wine, Katie? Can I get anyone else anything?”

    “Thanks, we’re good,” they all said in unison.

    I got a glass of wine for Katie and a beer for myself. When I returned Katie was gone.

    “She said she’ll be right back,” Sylvia Norris said. I glanced at Alicia. She smiled knowingly.

    After a few minutes with the group while holding Katie’s wine I excused myself to find her. Alicia said she’d escort me. Alicia asked if I told Kate and I told her I did. We eventually found Katie sitting with Phil and the ravishing redheaded Lynn.

    As soon as we entered the room Alicia mumbled under her breath, “Uh oh, this should be good.”

    “There you are,” Alicia said to the trio as we approached.

    “Hi Hun. Hello Daniel,” Phil said. “Meet Lynn
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    unassuming
    Posted: 2010/2/28 23:43  Updated: 2010/2/28 23:43
    Virgin
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     Gotta love a mystery
    Each one just left me wanting more....thanks!
    Tigerqueen
    Posted: 2010/2/24 17:48  Updated: 2010/2/24 17:48
    Virgin
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     fantastic twist!
    I can't wait to find out what happens!
    cuddlekitty
    Posted: 2010/1/17 15:39  Updated: 2010/1/17 15:39
    Lusty Librarian's Pet
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     DON'T STOP!
    Goodness... don't stop now! I want more of this story!
    Starlin
    Posted: 2010/1/9 20:07  Updated: 2010/1/9 20:07
    Flirt
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     WOW!
    I had a lot of fun reading all of these! I saw this won and had to go back to your profile and find the others to read first. I am glad I did! I will have to read your other stories, too!
    poohbear152
    Posted: 2010/1/9 17:14  Updated: 2010/1/9 17:14
    Flirt
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     Ruins
    where can I find parts 1-4
    stillpure
    Posted: 2010/1/7 14:55  Updated: 2010/1/7 14:55
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     ...
    Rotsen, I can see why yours was picked Story of the Week, and I agree that this award is for the whole series. What suspense you have me in! I can't wait for the next one. Very hot story, hun, 3 pts for you :)
    sweet_P
    Posted: 2010/1/4 23:04  Updated: 2010/1/4 23:04
    Lusty Librarian's Pet
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     Congratulations!
    I am glad you won or I would have missed this chapter! You thrill the reader and entrance them. I am a loyal fan. I love the surprise ending! Great job!
    Woman
    Posted: 2010/1/4 18:17  Updated: 2010/1/4 18:17
    Lusty Librarian's Pet
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     Nifty!!!
    Venus darling is right! Revenge is best served cold!!!! Well done!
    8PUSSIES
    Posted: 2009/12/23 18:53  Updated: 2009/12/23 18:53
    Lusty Librarian's Pet
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    From: frolicking naked in the forest . . .
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     A fitting end--
    Superbly crafted, as are all your wonderful stories. I never expected any less. A brilliant ending to a powerful series. Bravo, my friend! You do yourself proud. ----8P*
    Venus18
    Posted: 2009/12/22 8:53  Updated: 2009/12/22 8:53
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     Delicious...
    I firmly believe REVENGE is a dish best served cold ;-) Well Done Rosten darlin'.
    tendertouch
    Posted: 2009/12/22 0:49  Updated: 2009/12/22 0:49
    Lusty Librarian's Pet
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     Encore! Encore!
    If we stand in our seats naked and chant your name can we get another chapter? Please?? please pretty please.
    javasnob
    Posted: 2009/12/21 14:13  Updated: 2009/12/21 14:13
    Lusty Librarian's Pet
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     Chapter 5
    Once again, you've left me begging for more. Can't wait for the next chapter. I'm hooked! What happens next?
    tendertouch
    Posted: 2009/12/21 13:27  Updated: 2009/12/21 13:27
    Lusty Librarian's Pet
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     WHAT???
    I've never been into mysteries but you have me so enthralled I want to know what the future brings for all these characters. I think you could go on and on with this story. I was very surprised, sitting on the edge of my sit as I read. Thanks Rotsen for sharing this series. It's been a very excellent adventure.
    georgia_peach
    Posted: 2009/12/21 13:06  Updated: 2009/12/21 13:06
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     Holy
    Moly! The ending surprised the bejebus out of me! I absolutely love this series. You, dear Rotsen, have such a way with words it's incredible.
    Dancinggirl
    Posted: 2009/12/21 11:30  Updated: 2009/12/21 11:30
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     Aha!!
    You added in an extra character in the final chapter to make sure we couldn't guess in advance! Thank you for this series Rotsen, i've really enjoyed it.