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Straight: Serial Stories:
  Simple Missteps:
    Simple Missteps Ch. 01 (1/6)  

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Author: Tentativeness  Published: 9/2/2008  story views: 3210
 
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    Simple Missteps
    Chapter One
    By: Lillian K. Rockmore

    The massive oak door parted and a dark bundle was carried into the chamber. Scott flicked a glance at his squire as the young boy stood beside the large, ornate bed, presumably having difficulty in hefting the weight of the bundle.

    "A present, sir, from Duke Archmedes. His Grace beseeched me to warn you that it bites," he said before placing the wrapped gift on the bed and scurrying from the room.

    Scott remained seated, sipping on his delectably old scotch. The chamber was in shadows and he could only fathom the outline of the gift that was waiting to be unwrapped. In his mind, he knew it was a girl, probably a slave of some sort, sent to him only for his amusement. But what he did not know was if he wanted to use her this night. He wasn't in the habit of bedding wenches and classless women and he didn't feel particularly up to the sport that night, not after the dreadful news that had just reached his ears.

    He set his goblet aside and strode towards the bed, his dark eyes searching for a sign of life under the black cloth.

    Nothing stirred.

    He leaned over the figure and parted the cloth only to reveal a cluster of long, red curls. Intrigued, his deft fingers stole up the material, in a quest to find a face to match the glorious hair.

    He swore in the next second as a small fist connected with his jaw, sending sparks of pain through his body. In a daze, he watched as a black-clad figure crawled off the bed and clamored to the far side of the room.

    He could hear her heavy breathing in the silence. Coils of red curls fell around her tall frame, obscuring his view of her face. And even though he couldn't see her, he heard her clearly.

    "Do not touch me."

    The order was whispered into the air around her, her fingers clasping the black cloth to her breast. And as far as he was from her, he could see that she was trembling quite rigorously. Scott straightened from his crouched position and regarded the wench with amusement flashing in his eyes.

    "You dare dictate to me, wench?" he questioned, settling himself comfortably against the headboard of the bed, running a hand over the empty space on the bed beside him. He wanted her to look directly at him so that he could see the color of her eyes, the wealth of her features. But his wants were for naught as she cowered with her eyes and head averted.

    "I am not a wench. Nor am I a lowerclassmen. My name is Tiara de' Chastelle, daughter of Duke Debonshire, Wolvermonte de' Chastelle. And I demand to be seen home immediately," came the incredulous remark and Scott couldn't help the bubble of mirth that escaped his lips.

    "You expect me to believe that a common tavern wench like you is an heir of a duke?"

    She nodded and he had to

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    sweet_P
    Posted: 2009/5/25 13:22  Updated: 2009/5/25 13:22
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     Love this story!
    This was an incredible read! The characters are very real. I like how you open them up layer by layer. Her inner stuggle is well crafted. I enjoyed the give and take she fought with. I was amazingly surprised by the paragraph when he puts his bare chest on hers and shocks her making her gasp opening her mouth and he kisses her! Such a surprise and so hot to read! I can't wait to read the rest!
    tom thumper
    Posted: 2008/9/8 2:56  Updated: 2008/9/8 2:56
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     Can't Wait to Read the Rest...
    The first chapter is lovely erotic with that signature switching back and forth you so love.
    sexigmnst
    Posted: 2008/9/4 23:22  Updated: 2008/9/4 23:22
    Bookworm
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     For sure...
    should you continue this story...It is an amazing tale thus far and I can only imagine where you will be able to go with it in the next installments. Please do not leave your fans in the lurch...write as many more as you have!
    stillsopure
    Posted: 2008/9/4 0:01  Updated: 2008/9/4 0:01
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     What?!
    Damn straight you should make a sequal! The last paragraph implies there would be, and we ALL want to read more! I love the emotion you put in this story. It gives a more vivid picture of what's happening.
    illicit
    Posted: 2008/9/3 3:19  Updated: 2008/9/3 3:19
    Virgin
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     Simple Missteps
    That was a really good read! You're one of the best authors that I've seen in a while! Totally can't wait for the next chapters! Illicit.
    dragongirl0076
    Posted: 2008/9/3 0:32  Updated: 2008/9/3 0:33
    Bookworm
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     omg
    you have done it again that is such a great story. I so hope that you keep this going.
    singlerose
    Posted: 2008/9/2 23:07  Updated: 2008/9/2 23:07
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     i'll wait
    if patience is all i need to read more of what happens next, then i will most definitely wait. hope the next chapter comes out soon. =]
    MalGal
    Posted: 2008/9/2 22:03  Updated: 2008/9/2 22:03
    Virgin
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     good god
    woman! do not even think about not continuing this! you'd have a bunch of pissed off horny romantics hounding you via email if you didn't!
    romanticbunny
    Posted: 2008/9/2 21:50  Updated: 2008/9/2 21:51
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     WOW
    uve done it yet again T! i thnk its safe to say tt ure 1 of the best authors around! bunny
    hoodwinkable
    Posted: 2008/9/2 21:38  Updated: 2008/9/2 21:38
    Virgin
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     more please...
    ...i want more please. if a book stareted like this, i would buy it and never put it down...can;t wait for the next installment
    peachiebaby
    Posted: 2008/9/2 14:18  Updated: 2008/9/2 14:18
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     More
    I for one want more! I love your writing and look forward when seeing you have written something new. Love to read series and can't wait to see them fall inlove with each other! Wonderful job hun Peachie
    Rotsen
    Posted: 2008/9/2 13:09  Updated: 2008/9/2 13:09
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     Impressive...
    Impressive in your command of the language, impressive for your control over the actions of the characters, and impressive as you carefully dole out the heat and bloodlust of the chapter, for of course it is a chapter. The first of a number of chapters I hope.
    EEZMA
    Posted: 2008/9/2 10:28  Updated: 2008/9/2 10:28
    Virgin
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     u haven been writing for a while....
    .....but u made it up to all of us in this one!! it was soo extremely hottt! gosh!! i wish all romance novels were like this! more please!!