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| sweet_P |
Posted: 2009/5/25 14:58 Updated: 2009/5/25 14:58 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2009/5/18 From: USA Posts: 372 |
 You leave me hanging! This chapter has brought out the most emotion from me. I love the introduction
of the young girl and the rapport Tiara has with her. Bath scenes are always
nice to read about and let your mind wander.....I was not surprised Scott entered,
but with the leather bindings? I almost quit reading, fearing what would be ahead!
I am so glad I stuck it out. When the bindings were tossed in the corner, things
really began to heat up for me. I went from hating Scott to loving him. His tender
satisfying approach not only made her cum but inspired her to do what she had
earlier refused. I found it exciting to read because I am curious what is it
like for the woman to be on top. I can't believe you left Tiara there alone,
with the door unlocked! What were you thinking! I must go read chapter 4 now!
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| sexigmnst |
Posted: 2008/9/7 22:56 Updated: 2008/9/7 22:56 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2007/8/29 From: Ontario Posts: 78 |
Jimminy! Another masterpiece! I love the way that the characters are being portrayed and
the emotions that they are sharing with us as the readers. I cannot wait to read
more of this story and others that you choose to write in the future. In my personal
opinion, I prefer passive female characters but ones that have an opinion and
an actual character.
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| sawshy |
Posted: 2008/9/7 14:36 Updated: 2008/9/7 14:36 |
Flirt   Joined: 2007/9/11 From: Redlands Posts: 23 |
sawshy you have the submissive/aggressive tenor just right. more please!
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| stillsopure |
Posted: 2008/9/6 19:43 Updated: 2008/9/6 19:43 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet Joined: 2008/7/13 From: Posts: 342 |
.... Very lovely. You showed Scott's sweet side nicely. Cannot wait for the next chapter.
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| SatinAndLace |
Posted: 2008/9/6 11:31 Updated: 2008/9/6 11:31 |
Virgin  Joined: 2008/8/13 From: canada Posts: 20 |
so erotic this is the first time i've commented on a story, btw. i have to say that you've
described in perfect detail how a woman feels when touched a certain way or kissed.
i love your writing style; the words that you choose, the phrasing, etc. i join
the others in waiting impatiently for your next series!
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| peachiebaby |
Posted: 2008/9/6 11:13 Updated: 2008/9/6 11:13 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet Joined: 2008/4/26 From: In your dreams love, in your dreams Posts: 323 |
Both! Oh my Tent, this is by far the best story I have read in some time. Scott has
my heart and T is just the firery woman for him. She needs to fight him and then
win his heart. Don't break her to soon, and don't let him soften completly. I
can't wait for more! Kisses Peachie
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| EEZMA |
Posted: 2008/9/6 3:34 Updated: 2008/9/6 3:34 |
Virgin Joined: 2008/7/19 From: Posts: 15 |
he's so sweet! scott is soo sweet! as to ur qn i say passive. the hero can tke advantage of
her then!!!! lol. eezma
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| luvvmelots |
Posted: 2008/9/6 3:30 Updated: 2008/9/6 3:30 |
Virgin  Joined: 2008/5/17 From: Posts: 2 |
Awesome I absolutley luvv this series plz continue it!! I would die if u didnt
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| Tentativeness |
Posted: 2008/9/5 21:53 Updated: 2008/9/5 21:53 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2008/5/20 From: In your hottest dreams(: Posts: 237 |
Hello! Hey, Lusties! I would really like your opinion on heroines. I'm starting another
series, so that would truly help me(: Thank you! Lillian.
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