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| Mimi19 |
Posted: 2009/6/26 23:33 Updated: 2009/6/26 23:33 |
Virgin   Joined: 2009/5/25 From: San Diego Posts: 17 |
 Fantastic! I love the you began the story, please continue. I can just imagine what it will
be like for them the next time.
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| stillpure |
Posted: 2009/6/23 20:06 Updated: 2009/6/23 20:06 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2008/1/12 From: NY Posts: 5918 |
 ... Yes, a very good beginning. Can't wait for more from you : )
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| 8PUSSIES |
Posted: 2009/6/23 17:31 Updated: 2009/6/23 17:31 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2009/1/22 From: frolicking naked in the forest . . . Posts: 7238 |
 I liked this-- A very well developed beginning, and very interesting characters. With the time
you had spent developing the relationship, I was actually expecting and hoping
it would be a bit longer. Good job. I hope you write more. -----8
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