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| Dukky |
Posted: 2010/1/31 10:09 Updated: 2010/1/31 10:09 |
Chat Moderator   Joined: 2006/6/7 From: The pond in the park Posts: 1457 |
 Incredible I do not know why I never commented on this. Rarely do I find a piece of writing
that jolts me with emotion as this did. Wylie, this is immensely powerful. Congratulations.
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| silentheart |
Posted: 2010/1/25 17:15 Updated: 2010/1/25 17:15 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2006/5/8 From: Pittsburgh, Pa Posts: 100 |
Wow i'm very impressed with this piee. very well done will look forward to more from
you.
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| sassymom4 |
Posted: 2010/1/22 13:32 Updated: 2010/1/22 13:32 |
Up and Comer   Joined: 2007/8/21 From: in the stars of ur mind....but not your MILF.... Posts: 54 |
well done Wylie...This is a beautiful piece of writing :) I could feel every emotion the
couple was feeling...Sux they didnt have a happy ending...but that happens :)
I look forward to reading the rest of ur writing :)
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| Kadaddy |
Posted: 2010/1/17 8:30 Updated: 2010/1/17 8:30 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/5/8 From: Nairobi, Kenya Posts: 20 |
Kudos! Had 2 b story of year. Its amazin how u describe stuff.
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| shadowman321 |
Posted: 2010/1/16 19:28 Updated: 2010/1/16 19:28 |
Flirt  Joined: 2009/12/29 From: Your fantasies Posts: 21 |
Deserves It This story definitely deserves title of Story of the Year
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| Wabbit |
Posted: 2010/1/12 9:13 Updated: 2010/1/12 9:13 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/1/23 From: In the shadows Posts: 1095 |
Story of the Year!!! Well deserved Lovely Coyote! As I said before, this story was fantabulous!! And
it's already been added to my favs as I loved it so much. You earned this so
enjoy! Smooches and a scratch behind the ears too! xx
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| SpoonMePlease |
Posted: 2010/1/11 21:01 Updated: 2010/1/11 21:01 |
Virgin  Joined: 2009/10/21 From: In the California hills. Posts: 4 |
Stunned This was a very beautiful story. The best I have read so far. Good job!
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| DarkGoddess_ |
Posted: 2010/1/7 0:30 Updated: 2010/1/7 0:30 |
Flirt  Joined: 2010/1/6 From: In Neko Nightstalker's arms Posts: 36 |
steamy!!!! Wow! I am stunned, great fantasy- I will have this on my mind all night long.
Great job hun, maybe next time you will write about a certain place where eternal
night exists and things that go bump in the dark of night are it's citizens.
Keep writing!!
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| sweet_P |
Posted: 2010/1/5 19:53 Updated: 2010/1/5 19:53 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2009/5/18 From: USA Posts: 362 |
Congratulations! I can not think of a better choice...kudos to the Librarian for choosing your
story and thank you for writing and sharing it here.
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| MorbidFantasy |
Posted: 2010/1/4 19:26 Updated: 2010/1/4 19:26 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2007/8/31 From: In arms that won't break me Posts: 284 |
... There is nothing I can say about this piece. I am speechless. I keep replaying
it in my head. This is something that's going to stay with me. Thanks for sharing
it with us. :)
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| Woman |
Posted: 2010/1/4 18:31 Updated: 2010/1/4 18:31 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2008/8/11 From: The Interrogation Room Posts: 1253 |
Simply the Best! wait... where is that from? . ...- . .-. -.-- / ... .. -. --. .-.. . / ... - --- .-. -.-- / -.-- --- ..-
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| Shinzon |
Posted: 2010/1/4 15:55 Updated: 2010/1/4 15:55 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2007/10/5 From: Neutral Zone Posts: 213 |
Congratulations on Story of the Year Bravo Zulu Mr. Coyote! A most deserving award for a truly unique and exceptional
story. Regards, Shinzon
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| LaDramaPrincess |
Posted: 2009/12/1 12:58 Updated: 2009/12/1 12:58 |
Virgin  Joined: 2009/11/23 From: Posts: 5 |
Was not expecting that at all! I'm so glad that the story ended the way that did because it wasn't an
ordinary ending, not what the reader expects at all. I really enjoy stories that
have twists like this. Will be reading more from you.
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| sextoy4her |
Posted: 2009/9/24 18:35 Updated: 2009/9/24 18:35 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2006/9/16 From: Central Texas Hill Country 59 yr old guy Posts: 448 |
Good Job - Excellent Infact Wylie -- I did not read your story until tonight, I was bored --- it is in a
category I don't usually read is the only reason, even though you are a guy I
consider a LL friend. GREAT JOB!!! It had a bit of a special meaning for me.
I grew up in the middle of a Kansas "missile field" then when stationed on Guam
with my wife I was only 10 miles from the largest tactical nuclear weapons storage
site of the era. You did good. Ever watch the TV movie "The Day After."? I gave
you 2 stars, it was not "Blazing" but in some ways it was BETTER.
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| jakie |
Posted: 2009/8/25 20:32 Updated: 2009/8/25 20:32 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2006/1/29 From: USA - State known for "Big" Posts: 260 |
rainy thingy Give that man a Gold Star! Once again wylie you have hit a home run. You are
always a joy to hang with in the Lounge. Your stories once again prove that your
not just a pretty face!
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| javasnob |
Posted: 2009/8/20 10:15 Updated: 2009/8/20 10:15 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2009/1/24 From: wherever you want me to be Posts: 1057 |
Captivating oh, Wylie, a fantastic story. Your details of the cave, the situation they were
in, and just generally how dirty they were brought the scene to life. It brings
me to wonder just how many times something like this could, and has, happened
to the men and women of our country.
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| poohbear152 |
Posted: 2009/8/14 14:48 Updated: 2009/8/14 14:48 |
Flirt Joined: 2009/1/26 From: Posts: 22 |
Beautiful This was a very beautiful and sad story. It makes you stop and think about life
in general. Look forward to reading more.
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| peachiebaby |
Posted: 2009/8/14 10:14 Updated: 2009/8/14 10:14 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2008/4/26 From: In your dreams love, in your dreams Posts: 365 |
Well done............ Well done Wiley, well done.
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| Momma_Jenn |
Posted: 2009/8/8 23:54 Updated: 2009/8/8 23:54 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2008/8/6 From: Indiana Posts: 1494 |
Took My Breath Away Wylie this story took my breath away. I had to read it several times and each
I did I was brought to tears reading it. It wasso well done and incredibly articulate...
WELL DONE HONEY!!!!!
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| Luv2 |
Posted: 2009/7/19 9:23 Updated: 2009/7/19 9:23 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2007/4/7 From: Little Boy Luv2's Back! Ain't he CUTE? :) Posts: 5132 |
Wow Wylie! From the midst of war, you extracted passion! A passion seldom found at times
like this. These two characters, comforted and yet used eachother, during what
appeared to be their end. I am totally impressed with your style, your words,
your passion! 3 pts. for Wylie, for a great job! Congrats on your sucess!! L2
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| Pearl1113 |
Posted: 2009/7/19 0:22 Updated: 2009/7/19 0:22 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2008/9/3 From: Posts: 363 |
:D ohhh yay! congrats on story of the week!! very well deserved... damn i dont get
tired of reading this one :p
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| oxfordrhythm |
Posted: 2009/7/16 20:11 Updated: 2009/7/16 20:11 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2006/7/24 From: somwhere between church and state... Posts: 2122 |
intense wow. wow wylie, that really left me in a funny haze of emotions and disbelief,
even though the story was told with such realism about the circumstances. And
those last paragraphs really threw me — even though i kind of felt something
was coming — i just didn't expect that (nor did the characters) and that abruptness
of it all really left me shaky for quite a while after. It made me read it twice.
nice work and a lovely exploration of erotica.
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| tail gunner |
Posted: 2009/7/13 21:56 Updated: 2009/7/13 21:56 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2008/6/28 From: the great American southland Posts: 1138 |
a writer ... wiley ... great writing. ... and i know good writing when i see it. i hope that
this is part a longer piece that you are working on. ... also: i hope that your
view of where we --- afgan' s, aussies, icelanders --- are going has a brighter
future than this. what with Cormac McCarthey on the loose, life doesn' t have
to be that hard. ( i' ve written some heavy stuff in my time: i know that it,
life, is that hard some times for some people.)
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| Broadway_Betty |
Posted: 2009/7/13 8:59 Updated: 2009/7/13 8:59 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2007/5/4 From: Gotham... Posts: 446 |
Jaw Drop It's not often I lack the words to describe how I feel, in fact I have an abundence
of problems when it comes to stifling them. All i'll say. Enjoy the moment while
it lasts. Simply tragic-ly beautiful. XX BB
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| Woman |
Posted: 2009/7/13 6:01 Updated: 2009/7/13 6:01 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet Joined: 2008/8/11 From: The Interrogation Room Posts: 1253 |
Congratulations!!!!! Wylie darling!!!! Story of the Week!!!!! YAY!!!!! You are marvelous! I don't
know how to say more than what has already been said, but darling, well done!
Well done in deed! Muppet
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| Rotsen |
Posted: 2009/7/7 13:48 Updated: 2009/7/7 13:48 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2008/7/29 From: Eastern PA Posts: 596 |
Terrifically unique The thing that interests me most about erotica, besides empathetic character
development, is the way characters are brought into a sex scene: how they meet,
or how their juices are stirred. This was a most unique and well done bringing
together of two people which tugged at a number of emotional strings. Kudos.
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| wyliecoyote |
Posted: 2009/7/6 13:02 Updated: 2009/7/6 13:02 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2008/2/22 From: on the road to nowhere Posts: 1187 |
Thanks I do get embarrassed. Thankyou so much for all your comments. The inspiration
for this story came from the film "Enemy at the Gates", i guess i just focused
on the snatched moment of happiness. I just wonder what you are all going to
think of my next one...it should be along shortly. Thanks again, W.
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| Pearl1113 |
Posted: 2009/7/5 22:17 Updated: 2009/7/5 22:17 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet Joined: 2008/9/3 From: Posts: 363 |
<blank> sorry... i just, don't have any words, or at least none come up to my head and
make any sense at the moment... I agree with everyone else wylie, it's a great
story, it's beautifully written and it just keeps getting better and better...
and i like how ur stories are unlike everything else we read here in the LL...
uve got that originality and creativity... I've read all ur stories, and im not
much of a reader, believe me... but i just know, that ure a good writer and that
its gonna be worth the moment and the attention... and it always is :) congratulations
wylie
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| **teach** |
Posted: 2009/7/4 17:11 Updated: 2009/7/4 17:11 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2007/5/19 From: In the night skyy Posts: 1862 |
OMG Wylie...... wow .......so sad but beautifully written. Outstanding story hun.
Thank you!!! ((HUG)).Once again I look forward to more stories from you.
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| ~selene~ |
Posted: 2009/7/2 21:33 Updated: 2009/7/2 21:33 |
Virgin Joined: 2009/6/1 From: Posts: 1 |
W-O-W that was great wylie. i've never EVER read anything so romantic. the ending was
sad but it was such a GREAT story. kisses.
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| arushofjill |
Posted: 2009/7/2 20:24 Updated: 2009/7/2 20:24 |
Virgin Joined: 2009/4/17 From: Posts: 1 |
So Unique Unique, well written, and incredibly sexy. I absolutely loved it!
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| secretlysensual |
Posted: 2009/7/2 19:29 Updated: 2009/7/2 19:29 |
Virgin Joined: 2008/11/19 From: uk Posts: 5 |
fantastic WOW!!!!! what a beautifully written story wylie, i loved the sheer intensity
of it all, so different from all the other stories i have enjoyed on here!!!
in a league of your own x superb
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| Wabbit |
Posted: 2009/7/2 17:56 Updated: 2009/7/2 17:56 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet Joined: 2007/1/23 From: In the shadows Posts: 1095 |
Passion knows no fear What a powerful and thought provoking story. Well done Coyote! I can imagine
the fear and weariness of war being replaced by a basic need so great it consumes
all. To know that during the worst of it, one still can find that sort of connection.
Thank you for this story Coyote. xxxxxxxx
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| sweet_P |
Posted: 2009/7/2 11:32 Updated: 2009/7/2 11:32 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet Joined: 2009/5/18 From: USA Posts: 362 |
omg Wylie I was stunned the first time I read this! It is superb! Not at all like the other
stories I have read here. Your descriptions paint such vivid pictures in my mind.
I enjoyed the myriad of emotions making this a truly unique story. I will have
to see if you have written other. You have quite the talent!
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| technospud |
Posted: 2009/7/2 8:12 Updated: 2009/7/2 8:12 |
Virgin Joined: 2009/7/1 From: Posts: 6 |
surprised this was so not what I expected to find on this site. Very intense, intelligent,
and erotic. I look forward to reading more from you.
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| sweetheart2542 |
Posted: 2009/7/1 22:27 Updated: 2009/7/1 22:27 |
Virgin Joined: 2006/9/25 From: Texas Posts: 14 |
Incredible great job wylie!!! i immensly look forward to your next piece!!!! xoxox
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| BiSeXuAlWoNdEr |
Posted: 2009/7/1 22:25 Updated: 2009/7/1 22:25 |
Virgin Joined: 2008/7/29 From: Posts: 2 |
oh wow Wylie dear, this is truely an outstanding piece... i love it..
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| 8PUSSIES |
Posted: 2009/7/1 18:57 Updated: 2009/7/1 18:57 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2009/1/22 From: frolicking naked in the forest . . . Posts: 7226 |
Hiding, yet revealing. Words cannot begin to describe the emotions your story has stirred within me.
Vivid description and an intimate painting of your characters made for a very
real experience of your superbly written story. Thank you for making it so real.
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| Maddie |
Posted: 2009/7/1 13:37 Updated: 2009/7/1 13:37 |
Bookworm  Joined: 2007/2/11 From: Canada Posts: 150 |
very..... powerful and intense....and definitely thought provoking....well done! Maddie
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| stillpure |
Posted: 2009/7/1 13:31 Updated: 2009/7/1 13:31 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2008/1/12 From: NY Posts: 5911 |
... How could I not comment on such a beautifully written story? You have outdone
yourself this time. Sad and unexpected ending, yes, but at least he had a passionate
experience right before dying. Great job. The way you described the atmosphere
completely intensified the feelings and painted a perfect picture for this story.
3 pts for you, wylie.
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| Woman |
Posted: 2009/7/1 12:24 Updated: 2009/7/1 12:24 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet Joined: 2008/8/11 From: The Interrogation Room Posts: 1253 |
Stunned silence... Wylie darling, I've read this story twice today, and have thought about it often
since I first read it. I am once again stunned into silence from reading it.
VERY well done! the simple thought of how life is fragile, how a connection is
what counts most shine clear. The ending; still comes as a shock to me, and I
wait in breathless anticipation for your next peice! You continue to set that
bar just a little higher with each peice you write!
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