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  A Hard Rain's Gonna Fall 

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Author: wyliecoyote  Published: 7/1/2009  story views: 70076
 


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Author’s Note: This is not a political statement on any country’s politics or foreign policy. It could be set in Afghanistan today (though certain details make that highly unlikely) or set in the future in the States where citizens are defending themselves against a draconian government’s attempts to ban guns (that was a joke). It is a statement about the general futility and brutality of war but more than that it is about grabbing the chance of beauty in an ugly world. And some of this story is brutal and futile. Be warned.

The thunder rumbled down through the bedrock; dust motes and small rocks fell from the roof whenever the bombardment got closer or a particularly large munition was detonated on the mountainside. The tunnel was dim, a few battery or wind-up torches lighting the black and green streaked granite; it was also cold, so very cold. The figures gathered together in groups of two and three, barely acknowledging the vibrations trying to search them out. Every couple of hours one of the animal-skin clad fighters would pass out rations. The bombardment varied in intensity as the enemy tried to harry them to reveal their position. The entire chain of mountains was riddled with natural and not so natural caves.

The two sat beside each other in a small recess to one side of the main tunnel, chatting quietly during the lulls in the attack in case the various array of electronic tools in the enemies’ arsenal was seeking them out. Beneath much of their clothing they all wore foil blankets in this seemingly endless battle of wits, keeping them warm and shielding their heat signatures. They had known each other since the onset of winter two months before; he knew her reputation as a good fighter and from what he had seen since it was well deserved. When they had time they would often seek each other out and talk about their past lives; they had lived a bare twenty kilometres from each other, and would discuss those mutual acquaintances and friends who were still alive.

They never talked of the dead.

Sometimes they would wonder about the point of fighting on, but they both felt to give up would be to dishonour those who had fallen before. And the strangers still tried to rule their land. They had not agreed with many of their own leaders, but they were their own; and as far as they could tell most of the horrors perpetrated had been by the strangers trying to twist and turn or blast and burn what they did not understand.

The cave shook violently as a blast landed directly above them on the mountain; a large rock dislodged from the ceiling and he grabbed his fellow warrior, rolling her further into the recess as it crashed to the uneven floor. She lay beside him, his arms wrapped tightly around her as she looked closely at the dirty face in front of her, their noses almost touching. One of the others called quietly, asking if they were all right; she answered that they were fine, her eyes never leaving his. They pulled themselves up, gathering their weapons and sitting tight together side by side. The tunnel was much darker now, many of the torches smashed in the rock fall.

She pulled a pouch from inside her garments, carefully opening it to extract a faded and much worn photograph, handing it to the man. In the dim light he was able to make out a wedding couple standing in the bright sunshine, smiling at the crowd of children gathered around them.

“My sister...” she whispered, moving her mouth close to his ear, “from before the war... I don’t know if she is alive or dead...” He turned to look at her and watched as a tear slowly ran down her cheek, cleaning a line on her grimy flesh. He dug into his pockets and eventually found the cleanest piece of rag. He wet the corner with his tongue and slowly, gently began to wipe the dirt from her face. Gradually her flesh was exposed and a small smile formed on her lips. When he had wiped the last of the filth from her forehead she reached up, taking the rag from his hand, and began to wipe his face clean too. The thick stubble around his mouth proved stubborn against her ministrations but she persevered till, for the first time, they both looked properly at each other’s faces.

He slowly leaned forward and his dry, split lips lightly touched upon hers. She dropped the rag from her right hand, moving it to his matted hair as she felt his rough beard scratch the flesh around her mouth. Her tongue flicked out to moisten his lips then pulled back as she felt his do likewise. When she moved her tongue forward once more she felt his; the tips met and slowly, tentatively slid over one another. His hand moved up under her arms to rest upon her shoulders as their lips sealed together and their tongues slid deeper. She became aware of an eerie whine growing from further up the tunnel.

The entire mountain shook as a bright white light flooded the tunnel, searing the silhouette of the side of his face through her eyelids onto her retina. She pulled him down tight to the floor, hard against the wall, as suddenly the still air of the tunnel became an instant hurricane. The wind rushed past them to the fading light, now turning an angry red, as first empty cans and then guns and then people were dragged quicker towards the heart of the fuel-air explosive that had detonated almost at the mouth of the cave. Their lips clamped tightly together as they felt the oxygen rush away into the fiery centre as air from other entrances struggled to fill the vacuum left behind. Rocks fell and bounced up in the wake of the maelstrom, a few pounding the man’s back till the wind slowed and the chill winter air once more filled the tunnel. The red light faded to a dull glow and then almost vanished as the ceiling collapsed further up the tunnel.

He raised himself off her body, quickly realising that the rest of his comrades were no more; he made to stand up when he felt her hand clasp his upper arm urgently. He looked back into her eyes to see hope shine from within. For a moment he hesitated before leaning down to kiss her again. Her mouth opened willingly, drawing his tongue inside as her arms embraced him. He moved his right hand into her long knotted hair as tenderly as he could, supporting his weight on his left forearm. The only remaining torch that was working rolled away as he surrendered himself to the sensations of long ago.

As their kiss grew more passionate her hands began to press through the layers of his clothing, growing more insistent as they searched for a way through. He pressed his lap to hers as he felt himself stiffen feeling her urgency, pressing rhythmically against her as one of her legs slid behind his, pulling him to her. She pulled up his jerkin and scratched her way through the foil beneath, dragging a woollen sweater away and eventually finding his flesh as she tore through a cotton shirt beneath. He moved his hand down to her chest and squeezed her breast through the rough clothing as he felt her rough nails scratch at his lower back. Still their tongues writhed over each other as the world around them shrank away.

She pushed her hand down inside his trousers, squeezing his thin ass as her left hand wormed its way in and up his back. He roughly pulled her top down from her neck and his mouth separated from hers to suck on the dirty, sweaty flesh of her collarbone. She groaned as she pressed her crotch up against the lump of his cock. She began to tear and rip the layers of clothing away from his hips as her left hand moved to her own clothing, pulling at the belt around her waist. Pulling harder at her top, he exposed her small breast, an angry nipple atop of it immediately sucked into his mouth as he shifted his left hand to help in removing the constraining layers between them.

Her hand slipped around his body to grab his swollen member as she pushed her left hand beneath her unwashed panties to slide a finger rapidly between her wet lips. She swore as her finger delved deep into her quim, the ball of her hand pressing firmly against her engorged clit as he groaned into her breast. His teeth nipped her sensitive nipple as she jerked his manhood rapidly. She felt her slit quiver around her finger as she rubbed her thumb over the tip of his cock, smearing the pre-cum around his circumcised glans.

Pulling her hands away, she concentrated on pushing his trousers down to his thighs, exposing his hardness to the air and then quickly repeating the action on her own clothing. The cold air struck her wet slit like an electric shock; her clit physically throbbed as she grabbed his cock and rubbed the head up and down her slit. He bit the nipple between his teeth as he felt the warmth and wetness beneath him. She screamed and arched her back, rubbing the back of her head over the rough rock floor as she felt her nipples, cunt and clit connect as a small orgasm radiated through her body.

She pressed the head of his cock to her soaking wet entrance and then grabbed his buttocks; digging her nails into his flesh, she pulled him hard into herself. He filled her completely as he lifted his head away from her nipple, thrusting his hips and arching his back, driving her against the hard, unforgiving floor. She screamed at him to fuck her as they both lost themselves in an animalistic unity. He slammed hard into her three times before wrapping his hand behind her and pulling her over and on top of him.

She sat up astride his lap as her hands slid beneath his top and scratched the sweaty flesh beneath, drawing blood from eight parallel lines. He bounced his hips up to meet her downward thrust as he reached up and tore her top; grabbing her exposed breasts, he felt her pussy constrict around him.

Her cunt tightened savagely around his impaling cock as she was slammed into oblivion by an orgasm of a ferocity she had never felt before. The cave echoed to her screams as she felt his cock vibrate and pulse within her. He quickly moved his hands to her hips as his seed shot deep within her, the head of his cock banging against the top of her squeezing pussy. They thrust against each other, oblivious to the scrapes they suffered on the rough cave floor as they both surrendered to the euphoria of their orgasms.

Gradually their breathing slowed as she collapsed down onto his chest. His arms wrapped around her as their hearts beat in unison. He smiled as it occurred to him that he didn’t know her last name. He wondered if he had ever told her his. A few pebbles quietly shifted somewhere further up the tunnel.

He slowly rolled her onto her back and lifted himself up on his hands to look over the rock that had fallen from the ceiling minutes before. She watched as she saw his pupils constrict in the faint light from the torch lying beside their hips. His softening cock gave a quiver within her as his face was lit from further up the tunnel for a moment. He watched the small grey tube come to rest a few metres up the tunnel.

A flickering wave seemed to pass above her as she watched his eyes, the flesh from his face and neck dissolve into a red mist. The tendons on his neck and the white bone of his forehead appearing momentarily before he gently fell to his right; his still semi-hard cock slipping from her moist pussy.

The thought that it must have been a flechette type grenade of some sort occurred to her as she pulled her clothing up. She found a badly damaged rifle in the shadows to her right and stood up.

A single tear ran down her cheek as she at last went to find peace.

The End
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Dukky
Posted: 2010/1/31 10:09  Updated: 2010/1/31 10:09
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 Incredible
I do not know why I never commented on this. Rarely do I find a piece of writing that jolts me with emotion as this did. Wylie, this is immensely powerful. Congratulations.
silentheart
Posted: 2010/1/25 17:15  Updated: 2010/1/25 17:15
Bookworm
Joined: 2006/5/8
From: Pittsburgh, Pa
Posts: 100
 Wow
i'm very impressed with this piee. very well done will look forward to more from you.
sassymom4
Posted: 2010/1/22 13:32  Updated: 2010/1/22 13:32
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From: in the stars of ur mind....but not your MILF....
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 well done
Wylie...This is a beautiful piece of writing :) I could feel every emotion the couple was feeling...Sux they didnt have a happy ending...but that happens :) I look forward to reading the rest of ur writing :)
Kadaddy
Posted: 2010/1/17 8:30  Updated: 2010/1/17 8:30
Virgin
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 Kudos!
Had 2 b story of year. Its amazin how u describe stuff.
shadowman321
Posted: 2010/1/16 19:28  Updated: 2010/1/16 19:28
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 Deserves It
This story definitely deserves title of Story of the Year
Wabbit
Posted: 2010/1/12 9:13  Updated: 2010/1/12 9:13
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From: In the shadows
Posts: 1098
 Story of the Year!!!
Well deserved Lovely Coyote! As I said before, this story was fantabulous!! And it's already been added to my favs as I loved it so much. You earned this so enjoy! Smooches and a scratch behind the ears too! xx
SpoonMePlease
Posted: 2010/1/11 21:01  Updated: 2010/1/11 21:01
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 Stunned
This was a very beautiful story. The best I have read so far. Good job!
DarkGoddess_
Posted: 2010/1/7 0:30  Updated: 2010/1/7 0:30
Bookworm
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 steamy!!!!
Wow! I am stunned, great fantasy- I will have this on my mind all night long. Great job hun, maybe next time you will write about a certain place where eternal night exists and things that go bump in the dark of night are it's citizens. Keep writing!!
sweet_P
Posted: 2010/1/5 19:53  Updated: 2010/1/5 19:53
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Posts: 372
 Congratulations!
I can not think of a better choice...kudos to the Librarian for choosing your story and thank you for writing and sharing it here.
MorbidFantasy
Posted: 2010/1/4 19:26  Updated: 2010/1/4 19:26
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From: In arms that won't break me
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 ...
There is nothing I can say about this piece. I am speechless. I keep replaying it in my head. This is something that's going to stay with me. Thanks for sharing it with us. :)
Woman
Posted: 2010/1/4 18:31  Updated: 2010/1/4 18:31
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 Simply the Best! wait... where is that from?
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Shinzon
Posted: 2010/1/4 15:55  Updated: 2010/1/4 15:55
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 Congratulations on Story of the Year
Bravo Zulu Mr. Coyote! A most deserving award for a truly unique and exceptional story. Regards, Shinzon
LaDramaPrincess
Posted: 2009/12/1 12:58  Updated: 2009/12/1 12:58
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 Was not expecting that
at all! I'm so glad that the story ended the way that did because it wasn't an ordinary ending, not what the reader expects at all. I really enjoy stories that have twists like this. Will be reading more from you.
sextoy4her
Posted: 2009/9/24 18:35  Updated: 2009/9/24 18:35
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From: Central Texas Hill Country 59 yr old guy
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 Good Job - Excellent Infact
Wylie -- I did not read your story until tonight, I was bored --- it is in a category I don't usually read is the only reason, even though you are a guy I consider a LL friend. GREAT JOB!!! It had a bit of a special meaning for me. I grew up in the middle of a Kansas "missile field" then when stationed on Guam with my wife I was only 10 miles from the largest tactical nuclear weapons storage site of the era. You did good. Ever watch the TV movie "The Day After."? I gave you 2 stars, it was not "Blazing" but in some ways it was BETTER.
jakie
Posted: 2009/8/25 20:32  Updated: 2009/8/25 20:32
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 rainy thingy
Give that man a Gold Star! Once again wylie you have hit a home run. You are always a joy to hang with in the Lounge. Your stories once again prove that your not just a pretty face!
javasnob
Posted: 2009/8/20 10:15  Updated: 2009/8/20 10:15
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 Captivating
oh, Wylie, a fantastic story. Your details of the cave, the situation they were in, and just generally how dirty they were brought the scene to life. It brings me to wonder just how many times something like this could, and has, happened to the men and women of our country.
poohbear152
Posted: 2009/8/14 14:48  Updated: 2009/8/14 14:48
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 Beautiful
This was a very beautiful and sad story. It makes you stop and think about life in general. Look forward to reading more.
peachiebaby
Posted: 2009/8/14 10:14  Updated: 2009/8/14 10:14
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From: In your dreams love, in your dreams
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 Well done............
Well done Wiley, well done.
Momma_Jenn
Posted: 2009/8/8 23:54  Updated: 2009/8/8 23:54
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From: Indiana
Posts: 1653
 Took My Breath Away
Wylie this story took my breath away. I had to read it several times and each I did I was brought to tears reading it. It wasso well done and incredibly articulate... WELL DONE HONEY!!!!!
Luv2
Posted: 2009/7/19 9:23  Updated: 2009/7/19 9:23
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 Wow Wylie!
From the midst of war, you extracted passion! A passion seldom found at times like this. These two characters, comforted and yet used eachother, during what appeared to be their end. I am totally impressed with your style, your words, your passion! 3 pts. for Wylie, for a great job! Congrats on your sucess!! L2
Pearl1113
Posted: 2009/7/19 0:22  Updated: 2009/7/19 0:22
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 :D
ohhh yay! congrats on story of the week!! very well deserved... damn i dont get tired of reading this one :p
oxfordrhythm
Posted: 2009/7/16 20:11  Updated: 2009/7/16 20:11
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 intense
wow. wow wylie, that really left me in a funny haze of emotions and disbelief, even though the story was told with such realism about the circumstances. And those last paragraphs really threw me — even though i kind of felt something was coming — i just didn't expect that (nor did the characters) and that abruptness of it all really left me shaky for quite a while after. It made me read it twice. nice work and a lovely exploration of erotica.
tail gunner
Posted: 2009/7/13 21:56  Updated: 2009/7/13 21:56
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 a writer ...
wiley ... great writing. ... and i know good writing when i see it. i hope that this is part a longer piece that you are working on. ... also: i hope that your view of where we --- afgan' s, aussies, icelanders --- are going has a brighter future than this. what with Cormac McCarthey on the loose, life doesn' t have to be that hard. ( i' ve written some heavy stuff in my time: i know that it, life, is that hard some times for some people.)
Broadway_Betty
Posted: 2009/7/13 8:59  Updated: 2009/7/13 8:59
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From: Gotham...
Posts: 466
 Jaw Drop
It's not often I lack the words to describe how I feel, in fact I have an abundence of problems when it comes to stifling them. All i'll say. Enjoy the moment while it lasts. Simply tragic-ly beautiful. XX BB
Woman
Posted: 2009/7/13 6:01  Updated: 2009/7/13 6:01
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 Congratulations!!!!!
Wylie darling!!!! Story of the Week!!!!! YAY!!!!! You are marvelous! I don't know how to say more than what has already been said, but darling, well done! Well done in deed! Muppet
Rotsen
Posted: 2009/7/7 13:48  Updated: 2009/7/7 13:48
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From: Eastern PA
Posts: 619
 Terrifically unique
The thing that interests me most about erotica, besides empathetic character development, is the way characters are brought into a sex scene: how they meet, or how their juices are stirred. This was a most unique and well done bringing together of two people which tugged at a number of emotional strings. Kudos.
wyliecoyote
Posted: 2009/7/6 13:02  Updated: 2009/7/6 13:02
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 Thanks
I do get embarrassed. Thankyou so much for all your comments. The inspiration for this story came from the film "Enemy at the Gates", i guess i just focused on the snatched moment of happiness. I just wonder what you are all going to think of my next one...it should be along shortly. Thanks again, W.
Pearl1113
Posted: 2009/7/5 22:17  Updated: 2009/7/5 22:17
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 <blank>
sorry... i just, don't have any words, or at least none come up to my head and make any sense at the moment... I agree with everyone else wylie, it's a great story, it's beautifully written and it just keeps getting better and better... and i like how ur stories are unlike everything else we read here in the LL... uve got that originality and creativity... I've read all ur stories, and im not much of a reader, believe me... but i just know, that ure a good writer and that its gonna be worth the moment and the attention... and it always is :) congratulations wylie
**teach**
Posted: 2009/7/4 17:11  Updated: 2009/7/4 17:11
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 OMG
Wylie...... wow .......so sad but beautifully written. Outstanding story hun. Thank you!!! ((HUG)).Once again I look forward to more stories from you.
~selene~
Posted: 2009/7/2 21:33  Updated: 2009/7/2 21:33
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 W-O-W
that was great wylie. i've never EVER read anything so romantic. the ending was sad but it was such a GREAT story. kisses.
arushofjill
Posted: 2009/7/2 20:24  Updated: 2009/7/2 20:24
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 So Unique
Unique, well written, and incredibly sexy. I absolutely loved it!
secretlysensual
Posted: 2009/7/2 19:29  Updated: 2009/7/2 19:29
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 fantastic
WOW!!!!! what a beautifully written story wylie, i loved the sheer intensity of it all, so different from all the other stories i have enjoyed on here!!! in a league of your own x superb
Wabbit
Posted: 2009/7/2 17:56  Updated: 2009/7/2 17:56
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 Passion knows no fear
What a powerful and thought provoking story. Well done Coyote! I can imagine the fear and weariness of war being replaced by a basic need so great it consumes all. To know that during the worst of it, one still can find that sort of connection. Thank you for this story Coyote. xxxxxxxx
sweet_P
Posted: 2009/7/2 11:32  Updated: 2009/7/2 11:32
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 omg Wylie
I was stunned the first time I read this! It is superb! Not at all like the other stories I have read here. Your descriptions paint such vivid pictures in my mind. I enjoyed the myriad of emotions making this a truly unique story. I will have to see if you have written other. You have quite the talent!
technospud
Posted: 2009/7/2 8:12  Updated: 2009/7/2 8:12
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 surprised
this was so not what I expected to find on this site. Very intense, intelligent, and erotic. I look forward to reading more from you.
sweetheart2542
Posted: 2009/7/1 22:27  Updated: 2009/7/1 22:27
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 Incredible
great job wylie!!! i immensly look forward to your next piece!!!! xoxox
BiSeXuAlWoNdEr
Posted: 2009/7/1 22:25  Updated: 2009/7/1 22:25
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 oh wow
Wylie dear, this is truely an outstanding piece... i love it..
8PUSSIES
Posted: 2009/7/1 18:57  Updated: 2009/7/1 18:57
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 Hiding, yet revealing.
Words cannot begin to describe the emotions your story has stirred within me. Vivid description and an intimate painting of your characters made for a very real experience of your superbly written story. Thank you for making it so real. -----8
Maddie
Posted: 2009/7/1 13:37  Updated: 2009/7/1 13:37
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 very.....
powerful and intense....and definitely thought provoking....well done! Maddie
stillpure
Posted: 2009/7/1 13:31  Updated: 2009/7/1 13:31
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 ...
How could I not comment on such a beautifully written story? You have outdone yourself this time. Sad and unexpected ending, yes, but at least he had a passionate experience right before dying. Great job. The way you described the atmosphere completely intensified the feelings and painted a perfect picture for this story. 3 pts for you, wylie.
Woman
Posted: 2009/7/1 12:24  Updated: 2009/7/1 12:24
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 Stunned silence...
Wylie darling, I've read this story twice today, and have thought about it often since I first read it. I am once again stunned into silence from reading it. VERY well done! the simple thought of how life is fragile, how a connection is what counts most shine clear. The ending; still comes as a shock to me, and I wait in breathless anticipation for your next peice! You continue to set that bar just a little higher with each peice you write!