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Straight: Strangers:
  Consolation Prize (3/8)  

87 votes
Author: ftfagos  Published: 7/25/2008  story views: 37485
 


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lifting my eyes from her piercing I answered smiling “Yep. I’m a big fan.”


She laughed and only then did I look up into her kohl streaked eyes. The make-up was running down over her cheeks and jaw to drip onto Betty below. I liked the way she obviously knew what was happening to her previously precisely administered make-up and didn’t care in the slightest.


“Care to buy a girl a drink?”


“Are you going to pour this one all over yourself again?” I quizzed.


“Nope, I only do that with water and right now I’d like a Bison Vodka.”


At this point I will describe myself. I’m 35 years of age, just over 6’ and slim build with short black hair. I’m fairly good looking; not sure if the grey appearing round my temples makes me look distinguished or not, but I know I am no Brad Pitt. Smiling back at her, I led the way to the bar. I attracted the attention of the barmaid from earlier. She nodded to me and after a minute she came over with a glass of a clear, slightly oily looking drink.


“I didn’t order this,” I shouted over the din.


“It’s the only thing Lorna drinks; hell, she’s the only one who drinks it anyway.”


Looking over my shoulder, ‘Lorna’ smiled and shrugged.


I placed the rest of the order, paid and grabbed the drinks. Lorna led the way through the club to the far wall where there were some hi-tables. I watched her hips swing beneath her skirt, noticing the trendy trainers on her feet. She managed to find an empty table and we slid in behind it. I placed her vodka and my whiskey on the table, then pulled a fresh bottle of water from my back pocket and placed it between our drinks. She looked at the bottle and raised an eyebrow; I shrugged my shoulders in reply, earning a smile.


“So…” I began.


“Why you?” she interrupted.


“I was wondering.” I looked round the dance floor at all the young studs closer to her age.


“Well, they’re all just grope ‘n fumble material and this ain’t a large town… and I guess you’re a stranger round these parts”


“Oh. I’ve been here before.”


“Not in this club you haven’t!”


“True,” I replied.


“So what brings to our little ‘burb?”


“Would you believe I’m an assistant tree surgeon?”


“No… I figure you’re in banking or the like,” she replied, a little too close to the truth.


“Well in my soul I want to look after trees… so what about you?”


“Oh, I just work in one of the local factories, very humdrum.”


We paused in our conversation to sip our drinks, both looking the other over. To be honest she looked a mess with her make-up streaked all down her face, but the slight grin playing round her lips and the obvious “couldn’t give a fuck” attitude made up for it. And there was no doubt in my mind that once the kohl was removed, and hopefully her clothing too, she was a good-looking girl.


“So are we going to chit-chat for an hour or two, dance the old
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sweet_P
Posted: 2009/9/20 16:26  Updated: 2009/9/20 16:26
Lusty Librarian's Pet
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From: USA
Posts: 372
 straight strangers
Loved this story! I will never see a swingset again and not think of this! The chains on the swings are a great image....After lusting for Miss Marks, I think he is better off with Lorna :) Great Job!!
Woman
Posted: 2009/5/29 8:09  Updated: 2009/5/29 8:09
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2008/8/11
From: The Interrogation Room
Posts: 1317
 Swing sets are not just for kids!
This was just a fun story!!!!! FTF darling, your thoughts are so vivid, I could actually picture myself playing with a man in a park on the swing set.....
sexypr13
Posted: 2008/9/26 12:55  Updated: 2008/9/26 12:55
Virgin
Joined: 2007/7/6
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 very well done
great story! I enjoyed it multiple times during the course of my reading ;.>
luckykissx5
Posted: 2008/9/6 22:35  Updated: 2008/9/6 22:35
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/3/3
From: Some Girls are Just Born Lucky
Posts: 1691
 Re: Story of the MONTH
I really enjoyed the story ftf.. Great and well written, wow I'm actually feeling the effects from it and that doesn't happen often to me. Really good read
Venus18
Posted: 2008/9/6 4:34  Updated: 2008/9/6 4:35
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/8/14
From: Your wildest imagination ;-)
Posts: 3103
 Story of the MONTH
Goddess KISSES... I loveee this story... People are rarely who they claim to be ;-) or NOT to be... XXXXX
ftfagos
Posted: 2008/8/5 19:35  Updated: 2008/8/5 19:35
Bookworm
Joined: 2007/11/29
From: london
Posts: 81
 Thankyou all
All your comments are very much appreciated and two special ty's, one to fierylover because i reckon i wouldn't have spotted i got story of the week. Shame there is no 'chuffed' or 'gobsmacked' icon available here. And the other knows who she is, a big hug and a kiss when i next see her. Funny though i prefer my 'future of flirting story' even if the highlighted dialogue got lost in the edit. Again thankyou all very much. M.
Tentativeness
Posted: 2008/8/4 5:25  Updated: 2008/8/4 5:25
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2008/5/20
From: In your hottest dreams(:
Posts: 237
 That was interesting...
...but maybe a tad predictable. The climax in the storyline -for me- was actually in the WAITING for her to reveal her identity rather than waiting to find out if he gets Lisa or not. But truthfully, I really liked the way you put your ideas across, esp the swinging scene. God, I'm never gonna look at a swing the same way ever again :p Thanks for the great read! <3 Lillian.
firey_lover
Posted: 2008/8/4 4:52  Updated: 2008/8/4 4:52
Bookworm
Joined: 2007/10/24
From: California
Posts: 75
 mixed feelings
i have to say, i'm not sure what i think. i certainly liked the details, very realistic, thoughtful, well written, etc etc. i thought it was a tad corny that lona was lisa, but the story really wouldn't have worked with him dreaming about her that whole time and then just having her vanish. and i think that you put her back in as well as anyone could have. one thing i know for sure, is i look forward to reading more, and you certainly deserved story of the week
Venus18
Posted: 2008/7/31 12:07  Updated: 2008/7/31 12:07
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/8/14
From: Your wildest imagination ;-)
Posts: 3103
 Yummy...
Great story... like all your stories... Look forward to many more... ;-).
Estrella22
Posted: 2008/7/27 20:33  Updated: 2008/7/27 20:33
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2008/1/17
From: United States
Posts: 307
 Very enjoyable
That was well written, I enjoyed it very much.
wyliecoyote
Posted: 2008/7/27 17:23  Updated: 2008/7/27 17:23
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2008/2/22
From: on the road to nowhere
Posts: 1196
 Cool
Another good story FTF. Keep them 'cumming'. Hope to see some more or even the one/pair you mentioned. Wylie. (Why can't i put my hammer on here)
harbour1982
Posted: 2008/7/27 13:44  Updated: 2008/7/27 13:44
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/8/6
From: Vienna, Austria
Posts: 163
 your story
You're a brilliant writer, ft. I love your pace and the realistic details. A step above lots of the stories I've read. -hanna
Luv2
Posted: 2008/7/25 17:45  Updated: 2008/7/25 17:45
Lusty Librarian's Pet
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From: "HE'S BACK !!!" :)
Posts: 5321
 Glad to see ..........
I was happy you got to BAG that savage!! I am afraid if you hadn't, the story would have been wasted!! Good luck on a 'Repeat?' L2