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| sweet_P |
Posted: 2009/9/20 16:26 Updated: 2009/9/20 16:26 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2009/5/18 From: USA Posts: 372 |
 straight strangers Loved this story! I will never see a swingset again and not think of this! The
chains on the swings are a great image....After lusting for Miss Marks, I think
he is better off with Lorna :) Great Job!!
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| Woman |
Posted: 2009/5/29 8:09 Updated: 2009/5/29 8:09 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2008/8/11 From: The Interrogation Room Posts: 1317 |
Swing sets are not just for kids! This was just a fun story!!!!! FTF darling, your thoughts are so vivid, I could
actually picture myself playing with a man in a park on the swing set.....
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| sexypr13 |
Posted: 2008/9/26 12:55 Updated: 2008/9/26 12:55 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/7/6 From: Posts: 4 |
very well done great story! I enjoyed it multiple times during the course of my reading ;.>
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| luckykissx5 |
Posted: 2008/9/6 22:35 Updated: 2008/9/6 22:35 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2007/3/3 From: Some Girls are Just Born Lucky Posts: 1691 |
Re: Story of the MONTH I really enjoyed the story ftf.. Great and well written, wow I'm actually feeling
the effects from it and that doesn't happen often to me. Really good read
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| Venus18 |
Posted: 2008/9/6 4:34 Updated: 2008/9/6 4:35 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2007/8/14 From: Your wildest imagination ;-) Posts: 3103 |
Story of the MONTH Goddess KISSES... I loveee this story... People are rarely who they claim to
be ;-) or NOT to be... XXXXX
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| ftfagos |
Posted: 2008/8/5 19:35 Updated: 2008/8/5 19:35 |
Bookworm  Joined: 2007/11/29 From: london Posts: 81 |
Thankyou all All your comments are very much appreciated and two special ty's, one to fierylover
because i reckon i wouldn't have spotted i got story of the week. Shame there
is no 'chuffed' or 'gobsmacked' icon available here. And the other knows who
she is, a big hug and a kiss when i next see her. Funny though i prefer my 'future
of flirting story' even if the highlighted dialogue got lost in the edit. Again
thankyou all very much. M.
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| Tentativeness |
Posted: 2008/8/4 5:25 Updated: 2008/8/4 5:25 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2008/5/20 From: In your hottest dreams(: Posts: 237 |
That was interesting... ...but maybe a tad predictable. The climax in the storyline -for me- was actually
in the WAITING for her to reveal her identity rather than waiting to find out
if he gets Lisa or not. But truthfully, I really liked the way you put your ideas
across, esp the swinging scene. God, I'm never gonna look at a swing the same
way ever again :p Thanks for the great read! <3 Lillian.
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| firey_lover |
Posted: 2008/8/4 4:52 Updated: 2008/8/4 4:52 |
Bookworm  Joined: 2007/10/24 From: California Posts: 75 |
mixed feelings i have to say, i'm not sure what i think. i certainly liked the details, very
realistic, thoughtful, well written, etc etc. i thought it was a tad corny that
lona was lisa, but the story really wouldn't have worked with him dreaming about
her that whole time and then just having her vanish. and i think that you put
her back in as well as anyone could have. one thing i know for sure, is i look
forward to reading more, and you certainly deserved story of the week
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| Venus18 |
Posted: 2008/7/31 12:07 Updated: 2008/7/31 12:07 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet Joined: 2007/8/14 From: Your wildest imagination ;-) Posts: 3103 |
Yummy... Great story... like all your stories... Look forward to many more... ;-).
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| Estrella22 |
Posted: 2008/7/27 20:33 Updated: 2008/7/27 20:33 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2008/1/17 From: United States Posts: 307 |
Very enjoyable That was well written, I enjoyed it very much.
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| wyliecoyote |
Posted: 2008/7/27 17:23 Updated: 2008/7/27 17:23 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2008/2/22 From: on the road to nowhere Posts: 1196 |
Cool Another good story FTF. Keep them 'cumming'. Hope to see some more or even the
one/pair you mentioned. Wylie. (Why can't i put my hammer on here)
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| harbour1982 |
Posted: 2008/7/27 13:44 Updated: 2008/7/27 13:44 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2006/8/6 From: Vienna, Austria Posts: 164 |
your story You're a brilliant writer, ft. I love your pace and the realistic details. A
step above lots of the stories I've read. -hanna
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| Luv2 |
Posted: 2008/7/25 17:45 Updated: 2008/7/25 17:45 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2007/4/7 From: "HE'S BACK !!!" :) Posts: 5321 |
Glad to see .......... I was happy you got to BAG that savage!! I am afraid if you hadn't, the story
would have been wasted!! Good luck on a 'Repeat?' L2
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