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| fuckmehere1234 |
Posted: 2010/3/15 11:33 Updated: 2010/3/15 11:33 |
Virgin   Joined: 2008/8/10 From: Posts: 13 |
 wow made my pussy wet just reading it... write more please!!!!!!
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| kutti_xxx |
Posted: 2009/1/3 2:27 Updated: 2009/1/3 2:27 |
Flirt   Joined: 2009/1/3 From: india Posts: 32 |
 HOLY SHIT!! its awesome for a first time!!:) i had a hard time concentrating beyond the pussy
licking part!! but its a great story and looking forward for more stories from
u! i gave it a 3! too bad i never met any teach like Ms.Davis!![sod!]
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| frankwilson |
Posted: 2008/12/29 21:58 Updated: 2008/12/29 21:58 |
Virgin   Joined: 2008/12/24 From: Posts: 13 |
 Great start Made me think of some of the hot teachers I had, but no such luck with them
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| rosekies |
Posted: 2008/2/26 1:36 Updated: 2008/2/26 1:36 |
Virgin   Joined: 2008/2/24 From: Posts: 9 |
 MMMMMM I have always had this type of fantasy! It was very good!
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| frisco007 |
Posted: 2007/10/27 4:59 Updated: 2007/10/27 4:59 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/6/15 From: Up above the clouds Posts: 1829 |
 Sensational Nice story... wish I had a teacher like that when I was studying
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| Sexy Sarah |
Posted: 2007/8/2 19:48 Updated: 2007/8/2 19:48 |
Flirt   Joined: 2006/12/8 From: Posts: 30 |
 Details make it all worth while! The little things, noticing an outfit for what it was made for, describing how
pleasure makes someone unintelligent, those are the best parts. Great Job!
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| DragonFire |
Posted: 2007/6/12 18:13 Updated: 2007/6/12 18:13 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/4/16 From: Sadly, Ohio Posts: 232 |
 Wow If that was your first story, then I will have to say that you have the makings
of a great erotica author. Please keep writing!!!!
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| lavenderlilacrose |
Posted: 2007/6/3 23:58 Updated: 2007/6/3 23:58 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/6/8 From: Posts: 4 |
 great story love this story. it is smokin!!
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| Levs |
Posted: 2007/6/2 12:10 Updated: 2007/6/2 12:10 |
Flirt   Joined: 2007/5/28 From: Posts: 36 |
 Loved it Great story keep it up
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| UniquelyDifferent |
Posted: 2007/6/1 16:53 Updated: 2007/6/1 16:53 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/5/20 From: Wales, United Kingdom Posts: 4 |
 *Great* Great story, good build up, couldnt stop reading. well done!
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| neckblade |
Posted: 2007/5/24 16:48 Updated: 2007/5/24 16:48 |
Flirt   Joined: 2007/5/24 From: Indiana Posts: 33 |
 Gasp Well, I could say a number of things, but everyone else already said it for me!
Excellent piece of work for a first timer. Don't worry about the length. It's
your story, take as long as you need to. I've my fair share of long stories,
lol. (None posted on this site though :( )
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| Butterfly_girl_241 |
Posted: 2007/5/2 9:04 Updated: 2007/5/2 9:04 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/3/29 From: Hemet, CA Posts: 6 |
 WOW! For a first story, this is really good. Keep up the good work and hope to see
more excellence from you.
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| brownsugar72 |
Posted: 2007/4/25 2:25 Updated: 2007/4/25 2:25 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/2/23 From: New York City Posts: 293 |
 Very Good This was a great first story. I really enjoyed it. I especially appreciate that
the student was 18 and of legal age. The sex was hot and detailed. I look forward
to more of your work.
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| Luv2 |
Posted: 2007/4/14 17:51 Updated: 2007/4/14 17:51 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/4/7 From: "HE'S BACK !!!" :) Posts: 5315 |
 Hey HORNY FOCKER ! Hey HORNY FOCKER, You Ass-Whoooooooo !
You did a FANTASTIC JOB! I want Jamie too. Now she is the IDEAL TEACHER....
(slurp)
Now I've gotta' go find my "Monica Lewinski", to clean-up under my computer
desk!
Great Job.... We need more of bangin' Jamie!
Thanks
Jim (No.Calif)
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| jtweety |
Posted: 2007/4/4 4:55 Updated: 2007/4/4 4:55 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/9/27 From: Morgan Hill, CA Posts: 193 |
 Wonderful hot story Enjoyed this one, awesome job, very descriptive and well paced. It's a new
favorite! Thanks for sharing, can't wait for more.
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| coycarp |
Posted: 2007/3/28 13:23 Updated: 2007/3/28 13:23 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2007/2/12 From: Drifting Posts: 125 |
 Loved it. So very hot, keep up the good work :) x
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| dontrush |
Posted: 2007/1/23 21:25 Updated: 2007/1/23 21:25 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/1/21 From: Posts: 1 |
 I popped a tent... I often read stories where I shouldn't have a tent in my pants. Your first
story was smoking hot and I can't get up from my desk. And I liked the leng
th. The slow build up was worth it.
I'm looking forward to more.
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| silentheart |
Posted: 2007/1/23 9:08 Updated: 2007/1/23 9:08 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2006/5/8 From: Pittsburgh, Pa Posts: 100 |
 great for a first time that is great. I remember my first story. you did great.
keep them up.
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| viola |
Posted: 2007/1/22 10:56 Updated: 2007/1/22 10:56 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2006/9/3 From: Posts: 78 |
 This story . . . DAMN! My first story was way too short, and you though yours was way too lo
ng (it wasn't), so maybe we could help each other. btw, your story wasn't t
oo long, the build-up, the writing, and the finish were amazing. So . . .if
you've got the time, can you find my stories and give me your advice? It w
ould really help me =)
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| rwollert |
Posted: 2007/1/13 7:20 Updated: 2007/1/13 7:20 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/8/6 From: Arlington Heights,ILL Posts: 3 |
 Time with Teacher I personally thought the story was well told and had all the verbal spice one would expect. Bravo!!!!
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| cabinboy |
Posted: 2006/12/31 3:19 Updated: 2006/12/31 3:19 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/1/21 From: Great Britain Posts: 4521 |
 Mmmmm nice Woweeeee
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| Skipper1974 |
Posted: 2006/12/1 16:54 Updated: 2006/12/1 16:54 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/2/12 From: San Diego, CA Posts: 167 |
 awesome wow! Very good!
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| virgin_princess |
Posted: 2006/12/1 9:42 Updated: 2006/12/1 9:42 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/10/26 From: the city that never sleeps Posts: 3376 |
 Got me very wet This was only your first? It was long but had a perfect build-up to the awesome,passionate, hot sex. It was great you must keep writing.
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| johndeer |
Posted: 2006/12/1 1:30 Updated: 2006/12/1 1:30 |
Up and Comer   Joined: 2006/9/14 From: indiana, south east side indy Posts: 48 |
 OH MY FUCKEN GOD PERFECT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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| tango48 |
Posted: 2006/11/30 5:40 Updated: 2006/11/30 5:40 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/11/30 From: islamabad / pakistan Posts: 4 |
 good teacher you hey, you did a good job of teaching her computers, sure took good care of her motherboard !!
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| dude1012 |
Posted: 2006/11/29 20:16 Updated: 2006/11/29 20:16 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/4/19 From: katy texas Posts: 10 |
 damn good pretty good for ur first time. i agree that u should make it a series or somethin... keep it up
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| la_femme_fatale18 |
Posted: 2006/11/28 18:19 Updated: 2006/11/28 18:19 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2006/10/5 From: the little blip on your radar Posts: 130 |
 first story????? this was a great first story....very descriptive like i was almost there...maybe it's time to reconsider my career goals and become a teacher!
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| Hypothermia |
Posted: 2006/11/27 9:18 Updated: 2006/11/27 9:18 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/11/27 From: Posts: 2 |
 grand I thought the length was fine.
NIcely detailed.
Don't stop writing; even thought the ending was a bit sloppy for such a seemingly hot story.
=]
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| LittleToy |
Posted: 2006/11/16 13:17 Updated: 2006/11/16 13:17 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/4/4 From: The Kingdom of Far Far Away Posts: 452 |
 Excellent very well written, hot and sexy. Great details too
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| Paco |
Posted: 2006/11/7 22:33 Updated: 2006/11/7 22:33 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2006/10/16 From: Texas Posts: 88 |
 Made it all the way I ALMOST didn't make it pass the head job as that was so real I had to look between my legs to see if anyone was there.
And your description of the penetration up to and including the climax was extremely well done as I'm sure you left many readers breathless.
Some don't bother to read stories longer than two or three pages but this was definitely worth it!
You get a "blazing" from me as well as being saved as one of my favorites.
And oh yeah, bring it on "More!"
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| Eric |
Posted: 2006/11/7 21:15 Updated: 2006/11/7 21:15 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/7/24 From: cyberspace Posts: 2219 |
 Magnificent Horny,
It is hard to believe this is your first story it is so good!! Some of your vibrant descriptions were red hot!!
No question you should keep at writing. The recognition will come in time!!!
Shy Eric
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| spike43 |
Posted: 2006/11/7 17:44 Updated: 2006/11/7 17:44 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2006/6/22 From: East Anglia, UK Posts: 100 |
 well done Good effort, a well constructed story that was very enjoyable.
Spike43
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| Chione |
Posted: 2006/11/7 17:21 Updated: 2006/11/7 17:21 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/5/31 From: IL, USA Posts: 272 |
 Loved It Why can't I have a tutor like that? (wink)
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| bookie |
Posted: 2006/11/7 14:42 Updated: 2006/11/7 14:42 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2006/7/24 From: California Posts: 83 |
 Great job your story is great, i hope we see more from you.
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| bladed_thesis |
Posted: 2006/11/7 13:18 Updated: 2006/11/7 13:18 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/11/4 From: Hong Kong Posts: 152 |
 Good story I didn't think it was long at all. It was very well written and the way you described the sex was excellent.
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| ramrod_seeker |
Posted: 2006/11/6 23:14 Updated: 2006/11/6 23:14 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/4/27 From: Michigan Posts: 381 |
 sexy very good story, the length was acceptable, so don't worry! Hot!
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| nicedaddy |
Posted: 2006/11/6 22:53 Updated: 2006/11/6 22:53 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2006/1/30 From: tennessee, usa Posts: 133 |
 good job Nice story!...Very hot!
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| BigBoy |
Posted: 2006/11/6 18:33 Updated: 2006/11/6 18:33 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/4/27 From: Posts: 7 |
 MMMM.... Hott story, wish i found a teacher like that
and btw, I love Horny_Focker's pic, and her name (its from meet the fockers, great movie)
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| LittleIvy |
Posted: 2006/11/6 17:43 Updated: 2006/11/6 17:43 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/10/13 From: NYC Posts: 5 |
 Wonderful flow I thought it was really good and well written keep them coming.
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| keithbolton |
Posted: 2006/11/6 17:11 Updated: 2006/11/6 17:11 |
Up and Comer   Joined: 2006/10/9 From: Farwell,MI Posts: 56 |
 Great The was awesome.I would love to read another one. Keep up the good work.
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| vibsrus |
Posted: 2006/11/6 16:47 Updated: 2006/11/6 16:47 |
Flirt   Joined: 2006/10/9 From: Posts: 34 |
 good i liked it. it made me feel like i was really there...
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| RaFi22 |
Posted: 2006/11/6 16:25 Updated: 2006/11/6 16:25 |
Flirt   Joined: 2005/12/21 From: Mass Posts: 28 |
 Good Start Hey, this is pretty good for a first story. I wish that you turned it into a series though, where you described each rendezvous was a different story, instead of the ending you used.
I gave it a 3
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| Horny_Focker |
Posted: 2006/11/6 16:13 Updated: 2006/11/6 16:13 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/11/6 From: Providence Posts: 6 |
 Length Ok, this might be a little long, but I didn't feel I could break it up adequetly
also, this is my first story, so give me lots of feedback
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