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| GinLxxx |
Posted: 2008/12/15 22:59 Updated: 2008/12/15 22:59 |
Virgin   Joined: 2008/11/12 From: Posts: 2 |
 Loved it! One of the best stories I read on this site! Really well writen and loads of
descriptions... Absolutly LOVED it xxx
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| goth queen |
Posted: 2008/11/30 9:39 Updated: 2008/11/30 9:39 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/8/1 From: england Posts: 181 |
 wow! i loved it! this is a great story! please write more!
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| 65daysofsex |
Posted: 2007/10/22 15:39 Updated: 2007/10/22 15:39 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/3/5 From: England Posts: 19 |
 Excellent! Tres bien, mon ami! That was fantastic! Keep up the good work =) the 65
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| janah |
Posted: 2007/10/20 21:51 Updated: 2007/10/20 21:51 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/10/20 From: Posts: 2 |
 Re: Please get a good grammar book it's punctuation, not puncuation...
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| Padresj |
Posted: 2007/7/27 0:05 Updated: 2007/7/27 0:05 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/7/8 From: Posts: 1 |
 Comment Very stimulating effort. Please write more and soon.
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| Astrial Whispers |
Posted: 2007/7/20 0:01 Updated: 2007/7/20 0:01 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2007/5/18 From: International Library of Lusty Stories Posts: 93 |
 yum Kinky... little dabs of humour . I love it
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| hotlips69 |
Posted: 2007/7/3 8:40 Updated: 2007/7/3 8:40 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/7/2 From: england Posts: 3 |
 valentines very well written im going to cum
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| taoqueen |
Posted: 2007/5/18 22:02 Updated: 2007/5/18 22:02 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/5/17 From: Posts: 1 |
 well written very kinky, I love it :)
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| geobob |
Posted: 2007/4/19 16:10 Updated: 2007/4/19 16:10 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/4/16 From: San Marcos, Tx Posts: 247 |
 the unexpected Hey, pretty, your imagination must be as pretty as your pussy.
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| Luv2SwapAndShare |
Posted: 2007/4/12 9:29 Updated: 2007/4/12 9:29 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/4/7 From: The center of my Web... Waiting for tasty prey! Posts: 2229 |
 Nice Touch Pretty...... Hey Girl, This was almost like a traveling orgy.
Keep up your writing.... I'll keep cumming back.
Thanks for the warm spot!
Jim
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| kinkybint |
Posted: 2006/11/20 8:42 Updated: 2006/11/20 8:42 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/3/2 From: london Posts: 473 |
 like it. Who really cares about punctuation when reading a story like this? I enjoyed it, well done pretty.
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| Anonymous |
Posted: 2006/11/15 6:26 Updated: 2006/11/15 6:29 |
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 Re: Please get a good grammar book Get a grip of yourself,it's a damn good story, worthy of it's achievement and someone's put in a hell of a long time into this piece to satisfy everyone else who reads it. Your picky and imature, i dont see your stories, profile and it's interesting to see that your name comes under 'Anonymous'. Your quiet happy insulting this story, yet not brave enough to pit your name up or create an account. You are a prime example of a weasel faced coward. Next time you have an opionion to make put your name up and have the decency to act like the adult you are not!
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Excellent story, i love the way that you kept 4, 5? stoires going at one point and never faltering, everything seemed to just glide into place, fantastic and very unsual, I'll be looking for you name
SS xxx
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| az |
Posted: 2006/9/5 13:19 Updated: 2006/9/5 13:19 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/5/30 From: California Posts: 233 |
 Nice style Wow! This is the first kind of story like this that I've read at Lusty Library. Very different! I like it a LOT! Great job.
AZ
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| Anonymous |
Posted: 2006/2/3 16:37 Updated: 2006/2/3 16:37 |
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 Please get a good grammar book Your story would be much better if you did things like puncuate properly. There is not puncuation both before and after an ending quotation mark, for example.
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| Southern boy |
Posted: 2006/2/2 17:17 Updated: 2006/2/2 17:17 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/1/11 From: Texas Posts: 9 |
 I love it! Great story....very well written, Prettygrl....I loved it....your detail with all the scenes going on at the same time was incredible.
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| Rayhaan |
Posted: 2006/1/27 17:43 Updated: 2006/1/27 17:43 |
Virgin   Joined: 2005/10/2 From: Jersey Posts: 16 |
 Great Job Excellent story, very well written, There is nothing I would change except fot the guy getting cheated on that really sucked.
Still loved it!!!
Ray
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