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in to the fine, soft hairs of his chest.
Marcus lifted her naked body in his arms and laid her down. Unable to resist her delicious seductive lips, he flicked his tongue on hers, gently nibbling then pulling away, teasing Kate as he moved down to find the sensitive pulse in her naked throat inviting his caresses. He searched for her breasts, tormenting them with his hands then his tongue and lips. She began to wriggle, gasping with pleasure as he slid over her naked body easing his hips between Kate’s knees, gliding further down her body.
Marcus kissed her tummy, opening her under him, letting his lips taste the sensitive skin of her inner thigh. Lifting her knees to open her more easily, he slid his shoulders under her slender thighs, moving closer to Kate’s warm wetness. He gazed upon her womanhood, feeling his penis harden even more. She began moaning softly and cradled his head, pulling him tightly against her beckoning vagina. He eased her legs wider, making her lower against him. Slowly reaching down, he spread the lips of her vulva to visually enjoy each tiny fold, each crease, each wrinkle of Kate’s now soaked pussy. His strong, wet tongue plumbed the depths of her tightness, licking and sucking her boldly.
He probed her with his tongue, her wetness the target of his desire. He sucked her clit slowly into his mouth, her body sweet, sensuous and responsive under him, her hips shifting to push herself higher to meet his eager mouth. The musky fragrance of her juices filled his nostrils as he explored further, slowly licking the full length of Kate's slit with his extended tongue. Just as she thought there could be no more exquisite pleasure he inserted a finger deeply into her vagina and felt her body shudder with excitement. Probing deeply, in and out, exploring Kate’s inside. He pulled his finger completely out, then plunged deep again as he sucked rhythmically at her clit, his fingertips teasing up into her tightness, exploring every velvety curve of her inner wall.
“Don’t tease me Marcus,” Kate pleaded, not being able to stand the anticipation that he was building up, knowing that it wouldn’t take long for her first orgasm. This confident lover knew he was helping to make her body tingle and glow. Feeling so vulnerable she grasped his head, afraid he would stop. Kate moaned and gasped in pleasure. “God Marcus you are going to make me cum,” she exclaimed, her eyes closed, relishing the pleasure she was receiving. He inhaled her excitement, sucking her juices, her wetness dripping down his chin.
Kate quivered and thrust against his lips, tongue and face, bucking and giving herself to him. His fingertips curled up inside her to caress her very sensitive, hot, wet cunt.
“Sshhhhhh... just quiver against me.” Marcus broke away and held her whilst she continued to shudder in a gush of pleasure, his fingers still inside her feeling the height of her climax.
Kate moaned, her hands gripping his arms, her nails digging in until the spasms of her orgasm subsided. She sighed in pure pleasure, grinning and jerking as Marcus removed his soaked fingers from her oversensitive hole and placed them in his mouth. He looked at her flushed face, her passionate eyes and kissed her red lips, letting Kate taste her sweetness. Still breathing fast, his hardness apparent against Kate’s soft thighs, pleasure
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| Arwen |
Posted: 2009/7/5 8:52 Updated: 2009/7/5 8:52 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2007/11/19 From: Middle Earth Posts: 135 |
 Great What an amazing and great story. Congrats on making it Story of the week. That
story just makes me hope that I'll have an experiance like that when I'm finally
a FA myself ;) Well done, Tinkerbell xoxoxo Arwen
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| Jane Awsum |
Posted: 2009/7/3 17:08 Updated: 2009/7/3 17:08 |
Bookworm  Joined: 2008/12/18 From: East Coast Posts: 147 |
Lovely and Compelling This drew me in right from the start. I enjoyed it immensely. Your writing maintains
a sweet feminity while remaining concise, unobtrusive and extremely arousing.
It doesn't hurt that spending a number of days at an exotic resort with my lover
is one of my favorite fantasies. I am envious.
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| WETNESS |
Posted: 2009/7/1 10:16 Updated: 2009/7/1 10:16 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/8/31 From: Somewhere over the Rainbow Posts: 3156 |
job well done sweetie your story had me from start to finish...you were well deserved on the story
of the week...im so very proud of you...your writing has overwhelmed me....cant
wait to see what your next story is about.... xx
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| Rotsen |
Posted: 2009/6/30 12:12 Updated: 2009/6/30 12:12 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2008/7/29 From: Eastern PA Posts: 619 |
Terrific! This story was a pleasure to read. The descriptions were efficiently drawn with
a delicate touch. The moods were richly created and the characters were three
dimensional. Impressively, the all important voice, the tone, was consistently
maintained throughout. Congratulations on a superb job and also a well deserved
story of the week.
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| Mr. Awkward |
Posted: 2009/6/30 10:46 Updated: 2009/6/30 10:46 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2007/11/23 From: Posts: 208 |
Wow! This is what erotica should be! A complete experience...living the life of Kate
for a slice of time...wanting to be Marcus...what a fantastic piece of writing!
Well done, Beautiful. Me
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| angiewalkerblue |
Posted: 2009/6/30 8:29 Updated: 2009/6/30 8:29 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2006/1/31 From: Australia Posts: 1933 |
Very Talented Writer You are a very talented writer Tinks........don't miss your vocation girl........
And stay away from pilots......lol
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| Souvenir |
Posted: 2009/6/30 6:07 Updated: 2009/6/30 6:07 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2007/10/10 From: peeping at wubble from behind the ft index Posts: 174 |
Fantastic Oh !! Tinkalicious, great story loved every minute. Fully deserves S of the week
XXX
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| NaughtyFaye |
Posted: 2009/6/30 0:37 Updated: 2009/6/30 0:37 |
Up and Comer   Joined: 2009/6/29 From: Georgia, USA Posts: 41 |
woweee!!!***SO GREAT! DANG HE REALLY IS THE PERFECT LOVER!!! YOUR STORY ROCKS!!!no wonder u got top
story of the week, keep it up!
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| cabinboy |
Posted: 2009/6/30 0:12 Updated: 2009/6/30 0:12 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2006/1/21 From: Great Britain Posts: 4521 |
Errm Im.... Speechless, this is so good. Will come back and write something properly soon
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| 8PUSSIES |
Posted: 2009/6/29 18:17 Updated: 2009/6/29 18:17 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2009/1/22 From: frolicking naked in the forest . . . Posts: 7238 |
A Desire Fulfilled-- Your unique descriptive talents help to make the rich detail of your story alive
in the mind of your readers. Vivid plot that flows smoothly from beginning to
end, and wonderful erotic interactions between your characters, enable you to
gracefully unfold a beautiful tale. Thank you for sharing your talents! ------------8
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| sweet_P |
Posted: 2009/6/29 15:45 Updated: 2009/6/29 15:45 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2009/5/18 From: USA Posts: 372 |
Great Story I really enjoyed your story! I can see why it is story of the week! The build-up
to the end was delightful. Great descriptions painting beautiful images in my
mind. I will have to read this again!
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| tail gunner |
Posted: 2009/6/29 15:04 Updated: 2009/6/29 15:04 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2008/6/28 From: the great American southland Posts: 1139 |
a damn fine story ... tink ... truly a fine story. and really fine writing! the buildup is good ...
the erotic detail is good. ... ... are you sure you aren' t a writer of romantic
novels? ... you should be!
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| red rose |
Posted: 2009/6/29 5:22 Updated: 2009/6/29 5:22 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet Joined: 2007/6/27 From: Posts: 1670 |
The Pure Essence of Erotica Writing... A Beautifully written story Tinks & well deserved of Story of the Week. Erotica
writing at its best but you bring much more to this story than just Erotica.
The character development was perfect, built up at just the right pace, the depth
& balance of the story was held perfectly too throughout. You captured the readers
attention from the first paragraph & unfolded a hot, somewhat romantically and
exquisitely described story. It’s a treat for any serious reader of Erotica.
Well done Chicka, you should be proud of yourself, a very Talented writer indeed.
xxx
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| well behaved lady |
Posted: 2009/6/29 3:18 Updated: 2009/6/29 3:18 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet Joined: 2007/4/10 From: not taking life too seriously Posts: 4008 |
So well deserved Congratulations my dear friend Saffy, yes I am your friend but this story deserves
the 3 votes I gave it. I am fortunate enough to have seen the original and you
know how I felt when I read that. You are a very talented woman, in many ways.
I am so proud of you Saffy all my love Vi XXXX
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