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| Arwen |
Posted: 2009/7/5 8:52 Updated: 2009/7/5 8:52 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2007/11/19 From: Middle Earth Posts: 135 |
 Great What an amazing and great story. Congrats on making it Story of the week. That
story just makes me hope that I'll have an experiance like that when I'm finally
a FA myself ;) Well done, Tinkerbell xoxoxo Arwen
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| Jane Awsum |
Posted: 2009/7/3 17:08 Updated: 2009/7/3 17:08 |
Bookworm  Joined: 2008/12/18 From: East Coast Posts: 148 |
Lovely and Compelling This drew me in right from the start. I enjoyed it immensely. Your writing maintains
a sweet feminity while remaining concise, unobtrusive and extremely arousing.
It doesn't hurt that spending a number of days at an exotic resort with my lover
is one of my favorite fantasies. I am envious.
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| WETNESS |
Posted: 2009/7/1 10:16 Updated: 2009/7/1 10:16 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/8/31 From: Somewhere over the Rainbow Posts: 3156 |
job well done sweetie your story had me from start to finish...you were well deserved on the story
of the week...im so very proud of you...your writing has overwhelmed me....cant
wait to see what your next story is about.... xx
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| Rotsen |
Posted: 2009/6/30 12:12 Updated: 2009/6/30 12:12 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2008/7/29 From: Eastern PA Posts: 619 |
Terrific! This story was a pleasure to read. The descriptions were efficiently drawn with
a delicate touch. The moods were richly created and the characters were three
dimensional. Impressively, the all important voice, the tone, was consistently
maintained throughout. Congratulations on a superb job and also a well deserved
story of the week.
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| Mr. Awkward |
Posted: 2009/6/30 10:46 Updated: 2009/6/30 10:46 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2007/11/23 From: Posts: 208 |
Wow! This is what erotica should be! A complete experience...living the life of Kate
for a slice of time...wanting to be Marcus...what a fantastic piece of writing!
Well done, Beautiful. Me
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| angiewalkerblue |
Posted: 2009/6/30 8:29 Updated: 2009/6/30 8:29 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2006/1/31 From: Australia Posts: 1935 |
Very Talented Writer You are a very talented writer Tinks........don't miss your vocation girl........
And stay away from pilots......lol
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| Souvenir |
Posted: 2009/6/30 6:07 Updated: 2009/6/30 6:07 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2007/10/10 From: peeping at wubble from behind the ft index Posts: 174 |
Fantastic Oh !! Tinkalicious, great story loved every minute. Fully deserves S of the week
XXX
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| NaughtyFaye |
Posted: 2009/6/30 0:37 Updated: 2009/6/30 0:37 |
Up and Comer   Joined: 2009/6/29 From: Georgia, USA Posts: 41 |
woweee!!!***SO GREAT! DANG HE REALLY IS THE PERFECT LOVER!!! YOUR STORY ROCKS!!!no wonder u got top
story of the week, keep it up!
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| cabinboy |
Posted: 2009/6/30 0:12 Updated: 2009/6/30 0:12 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2006/1/21 From: Great Britain Posts: 4521 |
Errm Im.... Speechless, this is so good. Will come back and write something properly soon
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| 8PUSSIES |
Posted: 2009/6/29 18:17 Updated: 2009/6/29 18:17 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2009/1/22 From: frolicking naked in the forest . . . Posts: 7243 |
A Desire Fulfilled-- Your unique descriptive talents help to make the rich detail of your story alive
in the mind of your readers. Vivid plot that flows smoothly from beginning to
end, and wonderful erotic interactions between your characters, enable you to
gracefully unfold a beautiful tale. Thank you for sharing your talents! ------------8
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| sweet_P |
Posted: 2009/6/29 15:45 Updated: 2009/6/29 15:45 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2009/5/18 From: USA Posts: 372 |
Great Story I really enjoyed your story! I can see why it is story of the week! The build-up
to the end was delightful. Great descriptions painting beautiful images in my
mind. I will have to read this again!
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| tail gunner |
Posted: 2009/6/29 15:04 Updated: 2009/6/29 15:04 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2008/6/28 From: the great American southland Posts: 1139 |
a damn fine story ... tink ... truly a fine story. and really fine writing! the buildup is good ...
the erotic detail is good. ... ... are you sure you aren' t a writer of romantic
novels? ... you should be!
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| red rose |
Posted: 2009/6/29 5:22 Updated: 2009/6/29 5:22 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet Joined: 2007/6/27 From: Posts: 1670 |
The Pure Essence of Erotica Writing... A Beautifully written story Tinks & well deserved of Story of the Week. Erotica
writing at its best but you bring much more to this story than just Erotica.
The character development was perfect, built up at just the right pace, the depth
& balance of the story was held perfectly too throughout. You captured the readers
attention from the first paragraph & unfolded a hot, somewhat romantically and
exquisitely described story. It’s a treat for any serious reader of Erotica.
Well done Chicka, you should be proud of yourself, a very Talented writer indeed.
xxx
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| well behaved lady |
Posted: 2009/6/29 3:18 Updated: 2009/6/29 3:18 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet Joined: 2007/4/10 From: not taking life too seriously Posts: 4010 |
So well deserved Congratulations my dear friend Saffy, yes I am your friend but this story deserves
the 3 votes I gave it. I am fortunate enough to have seen the original and you
know how I felt when I read that. You are a very talented woman, in many ways.
I am so proud of you Saffy all my love Vi XXXX
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